The UST here is crazy. Love!

great idea

I really enjoyed it! So annoyed that nothing happened between them though ha ha! That's the sign of a good story though if your readers are getting annoyed :P

I think I just fell in love with your stories. Or maybe your Jess.. :P

Ahh..how much I ADORE this episode and yet there was so much more they could have done with it. This subway scene for example...just perfect. I could seriously see them and this happening in my head so vividly. I wish it did. As far as I'm concerned from now on, it did. Awesome, awesome job!

I love that Jess is such a gentleman, without losing any of his teasing, rough manners. In this respect (as in so many others), he is definitely his uncle's nephew.

I could visualize this whole scene so perfectly...oh, and I can smell the hot dogs, and I'm craving one SO BADLY!

I love that he argued with her about crashing her car...and insisted on paying, regardless.

I love that he didn't tease her about her obvious, if irrational, display of jealousy.

"And anyway, what are those stupid butterflies in her stomach thinking, dancing like crazy when he only says her name?" This is SO RORY! I love it!

And I love him tracing shapes on her shoulder...and their awkward monosyllabic conversation. Funny thing is, with Rory, the verbal thing comes and goes too. It's adorable.

Awesome one-shot!

Wonderful!

Cute little missing scene. Very good job portraying the characters. I can imagine Rory and Jess actually having that conversation.

i loved this! rory and jess are just so perfect for each other, and i can totally imagine this scene during that episode. really good job :)

Wow I really loved this. The tension is great! write more please

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! AHHH! I LOVED THIS! GREAT WRITING!

I love this. It's funny because I watched this episode yesterday and I was thinking about writing a fanfic for it, and then I came online and read this so now I don't need to.

This is fantastic. I love how Jess is in his element here in NY just as we all know he is. Any chance of continuing?

You don't own the subway? I WAS MISLED. Anyway, onto actually reviewing your oneshot (thanks for the shout out!): love the present tense - I always think it's more powerful. And I LOVED this line: She's rather amazed that a monosyllabic quasi-conversation can express so much. - so fantastic and so Jess/Literati. This was really fantastic - I'm in the middle of writing my own subway oneshot and it looks like crap compared to this -_- Awesome, awesome job and good luck writing!

Oh WOW. ;) You should have seen the silent fangirl "squees" I was doing as I read this in a bagel shop eating my breakfast this morning. ;) I was grinning from ear to ear.

I do like how your Briticism always get in here though... like "reads the adverts on the wall of the carriage" - we'd say "ads" or "advertisements" and "car" or "train" I think... ;) Etc.

This was amazing. Loved it. It SO should have happened in the show. ;)

Good Story