this story was amazing. totally well written and great job with the perspective and detail and everything. but i don't get what the thing about the undercover assignment was about or the part where he talks about almost drowning. those are the only things i didn't get thought. again, great job with this.

Whooa :D such an exiting story! Wolfe rulez! ;D

Omg. Best chapter ever. I loved it. So the story is done now eh?

Keep up the good work!

I loved it! That was nicely done. I agree with how you have Ryan perceive his "teams" conduct. especially since when he was grabbed by the Russians, both Eric and Horatio knew he was missing. They obviously ignored the fact. I hope you'll have more Ryan stories ahead!

Nice ending. You can really see both sides. They showed in this chapter that they care a lot for him. The care and concern Eric and Horatio have for him was obvious in this chapter but they were really in the wrong to not even know he was gone. It was sad that he was considering leaving because of it but I hope in the post story existance that they managed to prove to him that they do care about him enough for him not to leave.

Again you are really good at portraying the emotions he felt. Reading this story feels like he took an emotional rollercoster ride - hope, hopelessness, joy, despair, relief, disapointment and it feels like he took us along for the ride.

I really hope you write more stories about Ryan. He is one of my favourite charaters to read about and I did love 'hearing his voice' through your interpretation. Theres something raw, almost heart wrenching about how you tell what happens to him.

I want an update and I want it now! Don't leave me hanging like that!

Awesome story I love the suspence great job

I like the story and the different writing style. I especially like how you showed that he just didn't get over his previous experiences. Very well done.

I was so tense during this chapter but I relaxed

considerably when Horatio showed up!

Just wow, I think this was my favourite chapter of all. You did a great job showing the conflicting emotions. Ryan wants to be saved or get out of there somehow but he doesn't want the others to be hurt because of him. You really help the reader to get into his head and it makes for very powerful reading. I hope you have more csi miami plot bunnies in that mind of yours because I definately think I will be pining for more of your powerful writing after this story is complete.

Really seriously looking forward to the next chapter. Please post it soon I really want to see what happens next.

Really good chapter!

Oh shit! *impatiently waits for more*

You can really feel the tension of this. I really want to read the next chapter soon. I'm glad you chose to write this story, it is a rather scary situation for Ryan to be in but that just makes it tremendiously interesting.

I hope after this story is finished and posted you write more stories about Ryan. Particually lovely creepy ones like this.

Excellent! Looking forward to more!

Ooooer! Can't wait for more!