Wally can be an idiot. Sigh. This idiot will cause problems.
And oh, you need to state this is an AU.

I know is kinda is stupid, but I'm proud of my country being mentioned, #proudchilean

Totally feeling the aster. ;)

Damn. That was deep in its own way. Also the unnamed comment before this one is me as well. :)

Wally: I'M NOT DUMB, DON'T CALL ME DUMB!
Also Wally: *Takes a whole chapter to realise Brice is Batman* WAIT-

I feel like Wally, what's their punishment? Lol

You did well despite your lack of confidence. Even without it you still wrote a good chapter, bravo.

The ending of every chapter you write is so emotionally raw, you can feel the emotion oozing off the words as you read them, like tendrils of fog curling and wrapping around your fingers and up your wrists. His feelings of betrayal sent shivers down my spine. So well done.

That last line is so telling, you can really feel their collective dread when wally says it. You did such a great job with this.

THAT KICK SCENE THOUGH, I COULD SEE IT. I WATCHED IT IN MY MIND'S EYE. HIS FOOT MERELY 2 INCHES FROM IMPACT WHEN HE FREEZES, BATMAN COMING INTO FOCUS IN THE BACKGROUND, THE TEAM AROUND THE ROOM, EVERYTHING.

Fantastic Chapter

AWESOOOME

OOOOOOOHHH, I love how you did that! I was like, 'did he see the contacts wrong? Do contacts blend with your natural eye colour to make other colours?'

I was analyzing it as soon as he said "blue"! I feel like a cat that tried to pounce only to find you dragged the toy further away, this is so exciting!

Very happy indeed, yes. We got to see Richard hurt at the end. :)

Good story, but can you sick your ninjas on me anyway

You cannot even begin to fathom the love with which I have for this story. You see, I've found it only three hours ago and squandered it with such haste because of the tension that you have enraptured me with. I am in love with the way the words flow so freely and eloquently without making me stop as to ponder what the author was conveying. I cannot begin to delineate the pure ecstasy I get when reading this story. Though I have not yet been able to allow myself the pleasure to read any of your other stories, I'm sure they will be most wonderfully imaged, and have the most aesthetic and vibrant appeal as all great stories do. Please take it into careful consideration the gratuity with which I am thanking you for making such an astounding story.

I suppose, in a way, you could say I most certainly feel the aster upon reading the beautiful poetic yet not (How does one achieve such an accomplishment?) words with which you have painted into my mind. Reading and writing is truly a powerful thing, and believe me when I say, I really do fancy more of this.

I believe that the art of writing is much more picturesque than visual appeal, and this is most indescribably the perfect epitome of that statement.

Thank you, Skylark Evanson, for the honor of which you have bestowed upon us to be able to read this masterful piece of art like nothing I have ever seen before.