You should really write more. It was really nice humor but not crack. I can actually see that happening. Write more please.

You should really make more of these humor final fantasys as well as romance final fantasys.

Lol, good story. Tofu really is disgusting lol (no offence if you like it)

it was so good! you definitely kept Vincent in character. and I had to laugh out loud when I read Reno's part.

I think I have a poptart problem too... Like always, it was funny at brilliantly written.

Cute, I actually quiet like Tofu myself, but it has to be grilled with a touch of soy sauce and crushed garlic, or, if it's the soft type, mix it in with a little honey.

This was really great! :D I loved the detail and how everything flowed together, and the duct tape - poor Reno! Your writing style's really good, so I don't think you need to worry too much :) I enjoyed reading this :)