| Reviews for Planet Twilight |
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   blewartrk chapter 9 . 6/4 I think the story is interesting, its just the way they converse is always one sided like Bella didn't fucking asked shit and Edward just blabbed everything to her, Or maybe they are just very open about their feelings or something. You're putting everything on the table, i mean this conversation could have been on the middle for shock value for whatever reason, Edward just spilled all of his secrets like leave something for a mystery, man! |
| blewartrk chapter 8 . 6/4 Couple of questions 1. Twilighters are aliens who speak English? 2. I thought they took intelligent humans? How come Bella didn't know about basic sex ed? Bella sounded stupid when describing how she was unknowingly getting aroused. 3. Esme just swoops in when Bella got wet, like she was just creepily standing there watching and waiting for Bella to get aroused. Not a question, but odd right |
| blewartrk chapter 7 . 6/4 You just dumped their entire back story in one paragraph just to get it over with. It really bugs me that there is no emotion when they state something. Your characters are like robots. Its just Edward said. Rosalie said. Emmett said. Its really annoying to read. |
| blewartrk chapter 6 . 6/4 This is like an alien version of Involuntary Rapture? |
| blewartrk chapter 3 . 6/4 They were obviously kidnapped, but they seemed to like it? |
| blewartrk chapter 2 . 6/4 Still intro... Not so much emotion |
| blewartrk chapter 1 . 6/4 Good intro |
| Megan73092 chapter 24 . 3/3 I've been trying really hard to give this story a chance but you as the writer seem to have some unhealthy obsession with Anal sex/play. I don't want to read a whole chapter about how he is smelling her there? Its gross & unnecessary. It takes away from a decent story/lemon . Everyone has there likes/dislikes but this is way too gross for me to continue to read at every lemon. Please get it together |
| Mireads chapter 72 . 2/21 Great story |
| P chapter 72 . 5/18/2019 I have read this story thrice but still it captivates me. Thank you for witing this story. |
| mrs.addiecullen chapter 72 . 4/26/2019 Normally I can't stand foreign twilight stories but I have truly loved this one! It was so great and I will defiantly recommend and re-read this story! |
| Guest chapter 32 . 3/21/2019 Im having a really hard time connecting to the characters the plot is interesting enough and I really do wanna finish the story. I know you'll probably never read this (or maybe you will and I hope I don't offend you) but I just find it to sexualize... I understand it's m rated and all but I've been skipping those scenes every chapter I just find it uncomfortable to read with her being a slave (as you mention multiple times)... also the fact that addy is being train to be one as well kinda makes me feel sad... Sorry about this comment |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/19/2019 Soo far my only opinion about this story is Alice cries a lot... other than that it's interesting |
| bonnemine82 chapter 58 . 11/4/2018 FRANCE : Bonjour, Je relis votre histoire pour la deuxième fois et j'avoue que même si certains passage de description me semble long et répétitif, dans la grande majorité j'adore votre histoire. Merci pour vos écrits. Un bonjour du sud de la France. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/19/2018 Arent the girls concerned about their friend? |
