I don't usually read fanfiction with heavy emphasis on OCs, but I really like this one. I like what you're doing with Yuui, I like your clear, well-developed writing style, and I am very interested in seeing how the plot will develop! Thank you for being a strong writer and making me enjoy something I don't usually enjoy - I will definitely be following this story.

Poor Kurogane, though, getting random bursts of memory. I'm excited to see how this will end up!

Aww why'd it have to stop? I was enjoying it. But seriously, keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!

Please update soon!

I like how your story is going so far.

I'd really like to read more of it 3

Great job!

really like it so far. can wait to see what happens.

Wow! This is very interesting. I love how this is coming along so far. I also like the whole mysteriousness of Yuui's birth and how she wants to meet her parents. The wizard has me seriously curious.

Very interesting! Thoug, I can't see the image. :(