as i wrote once before:

(do remember the song of Dr. Alban? So I brought all of his choir sing for you)

"Sing Hallelujah, sing it
Sing Hallelujah sing it"
(yeah)
"Sing Hallelujah sing Hallelujah sing it
Sing Hallelujah sing it"
(yeah)
"Sing Hallelujah, sing Hallelujah! "

You have a very fascinating mind, I wonder what else he holds at its core.
It was painfully exciting, thought-provoking, full of insights I kept asking myself and with others. I have no doubt you've written yourself in the person of the doctor in this story. (Who would not want to participate?) they were lucky you were there to save themselves from themselves.
Of course, sexy as hell, but there is also sadness and disappointment for me, that this story will never turn to a movie, so you never get to see the love scenes, especially the fascinates "Orchid" you described there but I could not imagine him in front of my eyes...

(a soft Sigh) Not blessed with enough imagination ... or a good enough of understanding English

I have to say my favorite parts of this story is when Mccoy slyly interupts or becomes apart of it as the wise one. IT'S LIKE THEIR FUCKING FIFTEEN

I love how shocked Mccoy can get em' slapping them up with his witty comments of the pimping and always awesome Bones, Spock is so irrational in this (not to mention slow as fuck) and when Kirk cried AGAIN I didn't think I'd be able to contain myself, which is bad because their people SLEEPING.

This was really well writen and I really enjoyed reading it. lol. I also found it interesting how, in the first story you told it mostly from McCoys point of view as an observer. lol. Very well writen and extremely enjoyable! lol.

What else could I say? Again... it was totally awesome. I love your writing, your story idea and your portraiture of the characters. Please write more stories. There are delightful.

Oh my fucking god. That's all I can say. I mean... holy shit. this was amazing. Truly, unbelievably amazing. You just captured Spock like I always imagined him (not just here, all in your stories Spock is so in character), all that 'feelings are madness' and everything! Great! Amazing work!

Did you really write this in '77? Oh people could write back then... The way you write, it's fascinating, you manage to keep me reading and when I'm finished you leave me craving for more. Much more.

Incredible work, thank you very much sharing it.

Just one question. About Vulcan biology. I'm just curious where do you get these... well.. details about his body. I'm watching the series now (I'm at the third season) but there were no mentioning of this area, and I'm just curious if it's just made up or there exist an accurate description of the Vulcan body...I read other stories with description like this and it made me suspicious... :)

Again, thanks for this amazing story,

Liz

Again, love it. The perfect end to the story started in shelter and a lot clearer. Love the role McCoy plays in everything and of course the way Spock is shown to have that deep hidden vulnerability that's just starting to come out. Brilliant story.