Reviews for Father Before Me
sunbehindclouds chapter 1 . 7/19/2018
Way to squeeze the feels right out of me. Amazing! Love the ending!
KiraJenLove chapter 1 . 5/8/2017
Very nice!
Virtuella chapter 1 . 2/7/2016
Lovely scene, and fitting very well into the context.
Pen2page chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Awesome.
lalalla chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
awesome.
bec chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Wonderful!
Rarobin chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
How have I never read this before? This is wonderful. Foist these things on me! :)
Jedi-lover chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
I love it. Nicely done!
Reverse Keyblade chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Wow. I'm convinced your Zahn in disguise. Please continue with more Luke/Mara fics! It's always fantastic to see the drama/conflict between them before they get married, and them getting to know and fully accept one another.

As far as I'm concerned, you should rewrite their little tale...I'd consider it canon instead of the trash that killed off Mara. You'd write a much more successful storyline!
LynnisaMystery chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
About half way through this, I suddenly remembered it was fanfic. This so closely resembled the Timothy Zahn's work it surprised me. It was really, insanely well done. I loved it.
I Am Not a Human Being chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Nice :)
LeaMichelle chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
I read the story before this one too. I really liked it, I've always imagined that Vader was always secretly proud of Luke, and I can totally see him confronting mara jade that way. I almost wish that Vader had cracked his emotions to his son earlier :)

LeaMichelle
Atlasina7 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
I really liked this-and what a great missing scene to pick to fill in. Thanks for a good read.
Ma Vie Merveilleuse chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
Great follow-up! I'm still amazed at how well you write Luke and Mara.