First off wow such a disturbing and sad story about the evil that live in use all at least in my opinion. Still it was a very good read

Epic. Just epic. I love the plot of this story and how Dib's insanity and obsession are shown in such a plausible way. If Tak had actually stayed and then had some UST with Dib, This would've likely happened. I especially loved how there was lightening flashing when Dib's intense feelings were revealed. The ending scene where the lightning subsided but still had rain was also quite touching; showing that while Bib's insanity may've been contained but they're both despondent now because of what he did. One question though. Did Dib give Tak blue hair when he operated on her? There was nothing mentioned of him adding hair to her. Just curious.
Overall, an excellent story that was both entertaining and dark.

you need to put that it's complete. i notice that if you put when something is complete more people read it. i liked it. it was pretty good, and yes, i did read helena. it's good too. •_•

So, Dib Membrane has finally reached into the madness and insanity inside of him.
There is insanity inside all of us; it's power just varies from person to person. *laughs maniacally*

:O holy cow! Lost for words (not flaming just surprised!)

Wonderful. Nice and gory and bloody. You would not believe the intensity of the maniac smile on my face right now.

Why is this not in my favorites already? Really, I read this and fave'd it on DeviantART long ago, and I saw it here and swore I'd give you a review, and...I don't know what happened. Slipped my mind.

Anywho, on to the review- I love this fic. It is, without a doubt, my favorite songfic in the history of all Invader Zim fanfiction. No joke. Everything about it, the descriptive way that it's written, the plot, everything is right up my alley. The only problem I have with it is that Dib is normally right on the edge of insane. In that mental state, he's just a tad bit too mellow to be a mad scientist crazy enough to perform plastic surgery on his girlfriend without her permission. Oh freaking well, we all change as we grow up, right? Really nice job on this fic.

Monochrome Masquerade, over and out.

Aww...thanks for mentioning Betryal! That really brightens my day! ;p

I like how you did the opposite of Betrayl by Dib making Tak human. That was interesting and very well written! I also like how Dib lyrics were spoken between the two...same words but different meanings to both of them. Hehehe...a purely demented, good read!

I'm thinking of logging into my old account and making a note that there's a sister/brother fic out to Helena.

Wonderful again!

It's story like these that make me glad I'm reworking my old IZ fics!

Keep up the awesome work!

That was awesome. I just started reading Zim fanfics today, and yours was the first one I read. Maybe since this one is the one I base my opinions on, I will look down on the rest, but I really enjoyed your story. However, It would have been cooler to see Dib, who completely hates Irkens, turned into one of them, his reaction would have been better, and Tak has a more sadistic personality. I want more out of you, so I'm adding you as one of my favorite authors. If you do more stories, notify me please.

I really like this story, i would really love to see what happen next :D

Continue the story, in the name of Ziiiiiiim!

Ahh the delicious sadistic side of Invader Zim fanfictions which aren't present enough, I applaud your work and shall read your other works as well... Heheh I speaking fancy

*brings hands to face, makes a weird expression* ME GUSTA.

I love this. So creepy and yet so... oddly and indescribably beautiful. Lovely!

Maybe I just have a thing for psychopaths/sadists/crazy mothafackas.

Oh yes, I remember Betryal's Helena. Interesting retelling. Well done. Dib is truly mad in this.