Ooh, great job! Absolutely grand, this was. It was surreal, it'd horrify the casual viewer.
Senpai certainly didn't forgive him, not until it was too late.

...I didn't understand a thing

quite surreal, and sad

Wow. I love these angsty dramatic tragedies so much and this is amazing. Lemons are hot and all that, but these dark seductive tales are dead sexy. Like my pun? . heehee, I had to. ;)

So Souichi killed him? 0_0 um, so glad Souichi did have feelings for him long before the rape. ; other wise this WOULD have happened. XD

Oh, my God, that was brutal! Superbly written, but brutal! I enjoyed it, though, because it was harsh and(as you put it)suspenseful. Thanks for this interesting "what if"! [I'm SO glad the manga didn't go this way...O_O)

Really enjoyed this, loved the intensity. Keep Writing!