| Reviews for The Eleventh Hour |
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   freetobescary chapter 13 . 4/22 Wow. Just... WOW. I’m 9 years late, and really new to the fandom, but this story is just the best I’ve read so far. The characters are so spot on, the plot is amazing... The way Steve keeps his composure until Danny passes out completely and then completely losing it until he sees Danny awake again.. Just perfect. And amazing. I LOVED it. I’m so bummed you didn’t keep writing a thousand more multi-chapter stories. You definitely should have.. |
| mrspencil chapter 13 . 4/7 Deft writing, tension maintained throughout, voices and thoughts in character. Well done:-) |
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/7/2019 I enjoyed your story, you did a good job capturing Steve and Danny bantering. Well done |
| NightcoreFairy chapter 13 . 8/18/2017 This was really a fantastic story. I prefer to read fanfics of them in a romantic relationship but I decided to give this a chance and I was not disappointed at all. Your writing style is enjoyable to read through and eye-catching. All the raw emotions, feelings and thoughts of Steve's and Danny's were immediately passed on to me and had a great impact. You captured their personalities so well- as you perfectly captured their friendship and interactions. I am amazed, because I would have never thought that I would have loved a 'SteveDanny' fanfic like this. You are trully a very talented writer. |
| SleuthCK chapter 13 . 4/21/2017 Just found your writing and this story, loved it. I couldn't stop reading. Fantastic suspense and drama, great characterisations. Am now off to search for more of your writing. |
| SandraS chapter 13 . 4/16/2017 Great read, thank you for sharing. |
| Cubit2 chapter 13 . 4/10/2017 This was wonderful. Your Danny whump was excellent and your characterizations were spot-on. I felt everything that they were going through and I could just hear their banter when I read it. I wish I had the time to detail all the wonderful things about this fic, but I don't so I'll summarize this way - a fanfic masterpiece. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/13/2016 I just found your fic. It's really really really really good. What a journey of rollercoaster that was. Thank you for posting this! |
| elysiann chapter 13 . 5/1/2016 WELL DONE. You have a gift for whumping (trust me, it's hard to find really chilling angst and h/c like this) and absolutely NAILED the psychological edge/ human leverage angle. When Blaine shot Danny, my stomach dropped, and I genuinely started to panic. Kudos to you, not many fics physically affect me like that. This is easily the best Five-0 story I've read... looking forward to more whump and h/c from you. |
| detectivejiju chapter 13 . 1/27/2016 Fabulous FF! This has become among my top favourites. It was soo so perfect. Danny, Steve, whump, plot... Everything was so well written. Love your way of writing. The best! Enjoyed reading it and now this has become one FF close to my heart. :) |
| detectivejiju chapter 2 . 1/25/2016 Read the first 2 chapters and it's fantastic! Just love the way you write. U have shown Danny and Steve perfectly... Loving the Banter between them.. One line I am reading seriously and next I laugh like a goof. Thought of giving a review before I fall deep into this FF. :) |
| macberly chapter 13 . 11/24/2015 Wow! Wonderful, absolutely wonderful story! Thank you for sharing! |
| Dimac99 chapter 13 . 5/26/2015 Great fic, really great job keeping the tension up throughout. And I loved the twist, ironic indeed. |
| dHALL chapter 13 . 3/19/2015 Excellent! I absolutely loved how well you captured the true to character banter, even in the most dire and serious of moments. Great story! |
| dHALL chapter 9 . 3/19/2015 Sorry, I forgot to log in for the last chapter... I just wanted to tell you that I loved your banter here between our two guys. great dialogue. |
