Reviews for When Time Stops
AsiYepYep chapter 17 . 10/31/2019
Oh, esta historia es increíble. Está bien construida y tiene desarrollo de personajes ¿Algo más? ¿Qué faltaría? Si, actualización.

Al principio creí que sería el típico formato en el cual un personaje regresiona en edad por un jutsu, pero termina recuperando sus recuerdo y edad correspondientes en un lapso no muy largo. Sin embargo, en esta historia, sucede una premisa muy interesante y cautivadora ¡Es irreversible! O al menos eso da a entender hasta ahora.

Me encanta que Naruto se haga cargo de sus sensei y que aplique muchas de sus enseñanzas en él. Además se siente el dolor y preocupación del resto por este asunto fortuito y agravante. Así mismo, los antagonistas también tienen una historia, no son vacíos y se conoce su entorno y motivaciones, pero aún falta comprender más.

La interacción con otros niños de su edad o similares es muy estresante para Kakashi, y concuerda completamente con su personaje. Me gusta el manejo.

Por último, los episodios de confusión de realidades y/o recuerdos es un tema serio, puede poner en peligro a quien esté presente en el momento y al mismo Kakashi.
Jet Set Radio Yoyo chapter 16 . 4/3/2019
Lord, I love this story. It's such an interesting idea and it is a lot of fun to read.

I love how easily Naruto slipped into the role of big brother. He took to it like a water takes to fish, and it is easy to see that he cares a lot for Kakashi. Things aren't perfect obviously and Kakashi still needs to learn to voice his worries to his brother, but it is a learning process. I just like that they care so much about each other.

As for Kakashi I feel so bad for him. It's interesting how he can easily slip into his old memories/life without even realizing it and roll with that for a while only to snap back to the present. It makes for some interesting problems to deal with.

I also like that this has an 'everything old is new again' sort of feel to it. There are differences, but everything sort of blinds together. There are echos of Kakashi's past with Rin, Minato, and Obito here with his current team. There are also echos of Naruto's time as a student here.

There are differences too without a doubt, but somehow that makes the similarities just stand out more. On a separate note thanks to how much Kakashi tends to combine Minato and Naruto into one person in his mixed up mind I now envision that Naruto has grown his hair out so that it is like Minato's hair.

Anyway, I hope you will update this again someday or alternatively post that fixed up new version that you were talking about. This story is a gift.
QuiteLagom42 chapter 17 . 3/10/2019
I really love this story, hope you'll continue it!
Shurl chapter 17 . 8/30/2018
I just found this, don’t stop please!
Guest chapter 17 . 7/4/2018
Finish the story.
GrindingV2 chapter 15 . 6/22/2018
I think the links for your artwork are a little broken...
seidraikiri chapter 17 . 6/8/2018
Awesome, can't wait.
bfrancesss chapter 17 . 6/1/2018
yeeeeeey
Guest chapter 2 . 10/21/2017
Wtf Sakumo is not a bastard.

The only reason Kakashi was such a stickler for shinobi protocol was since he saw what happened to Sakumo when he didn't follow them
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
Sakumo Hatake would never say "Show no mercy"

He's the complete opposite of that cause if you remember, Sakumo abandoned his mission to save his comrades. This is the whole reason he was ostracized and committed suicide
Maxine chapter 4 . 12/14/2016
Why are you torturing kakashi-sensei?!
Narutofanninja2 chapter 16 . 5/29/2016
Broooo please finish this its to sad XD
SaltyCats chapter 16 . 5/28/2016
I really enjoy your Story so far. I like how you include the fact that Kakashi is still suffering from his memories. If you can, please update soon!
Bughaw chapter 1 . 5/13/2016
this is really cute..
Hmm chapter 16 . 2/25/2016
This is really great!
I hope you will continue the story :D
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