| Reviews for To The Grave |
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AyaJune chapter 1 . 6/15/2018 Oh my gosh these are all so good and thought out. I especially liked how to wrote Peter, he wasn't a idiot, i mean, yeah, he was a little slow on the uptake but he wasn't stupid. I also really liked the whole confudous spell at the Quidditch tryouts and how everybody thought it was Regulus. Very good. Do you think you could write more? I'd absolutely love that! Maybe McGonagall, Regulus, Dudley (he's a wizard?!) or Neville? |
AyaJune chapter 12 . 11/6/2017 Theses are really, really good |
AyaJune chapter 2 . 11/6/2017 Oh this sad |
AyaJune chapter 1 . 11/6/2017 Aw this is reall good |
sofiarose613 chapter 12 . 1/5/2016 My mind is blown at number 11 and the one where he hunted down the boys |
InsertPhenomenalNameHere chapter 12 . 1/5/2016 I'm supposed to be studying for a colossal science test right now, but instead I chose to read this. And I'm so glad I did. This is brilliantly written and induced some very provocative thoughts for me. It shows completely new sides to the canon characters we all know and love. It gives us a glimpse into their minds. You're a fantastic writer, keep it up. I'd love another update soon, perhaps with one of the twins? |
Guest chapter 12 . 1/5/2016 oh my god. oh mY GOD. oH. MY. GOD. THESE ARE SO GOOD! Every chapter is incredibly thought provoking and they just keep getting better and better and better. It's just so good! You're a phenomenal writer, and you have loads of talent. Never stop writing. |
Hoodie Hugger chapter 8 . 11/10/2013 Many of these are very thought provoking! I especially think that #7 and #8 could be a story by themselves. |
millie-mae chapter 11 . 5/18/2012 these are all so perfect and some are so sad, but in a beautiful way, if you know what I mean. |
lowi chapter 11 . 4/1/2012 I loved this chapter. All of them were so right, so haunting, and so ginny. The tone is really perfect! Keep it up! |
Sheila Chiaroscura chapter 11 . 4/1/2012 It's great how you manage to capture the characters so well by simply stating 10 of their possible secrets in a way that's neither angsty nor in any way over-the-top. This neutral way in which you make the characters tell their thoughts in their own voices is what makes this story very powerful. In this chapter, #4, 6 and 8 intrigued me the most. Keep updating please! |
DrEvilsketch chapter 11 . 3/26/2012 Man.. you're so legit. I'd really like it if you wrote and updated more! whatever happened to "RAVENCLAW"? I really like how you manage to ad these really strong statements at the end (such as: I still miss Tom sometimes) in the most minimal, simple, not overdramatic way. You also capture the character's little quirks and voices quite well. I felt that some of the secrets in this story were a bit meandering when they didn't need to be, but i also feel thats you warming up cause they're mostly at the beginning. Anyway, keeeeep writing! I appreciate it cause I like reading well written stuff and I'm sure you know as well as I do that theres not a whole lot of that out there. peace DrEvilsketch |
StoriesAreMagic chapter 10 . 11/20/2011 So, wrestling a camel? Ron has quite the imagination. I really like this, please write more. |
lowi chapter 10 . 11/19/2011 Brilliant, as simple as that. All of these, wow, they were so "Ron", you know? You write perfectly, I love this story. |
CapitainIAmNotARobot chapter 10 . 11/19/2011 I love these. Could you do one for Neville? |