mais c'est mechant et en plus c'est de la merde

Poor Goten. All of a sudden I hate Trunks-kun...I mean Trunks. OKAY! FINE! So I have little crush on him. Still a good fic though. XOXO Gossip Girl. Okay that's it I need some mind medecine.

That wasn't really what I was expecting. At all. But it was well written. On a more critical note, the beginning, until Goten went to sleep, was *very* well characterized. The rest was not so much so, but enough that it was convincing. It didn't really detract from my enjoyment of the fic.

Good job! _

Cool story! but alittle creepy/\

nice and dark...just the way i like it:) this is a good story. keep it up

you always make Trunks so tyranical...hehe so what if I love it! at least this one isn't as sad as the other between them... god... well, ya, keep writing these, you're just so damn good!~Meko

OMG, this is so... so... whoa! I -love- angst! This is brilliant! *whimpers* But... so dark. Wait, me likes dark, too. *ish twisted? nods* I just... so love it! Keep up the great works.

Very, very dark and very, very good. Ooh, I loved it! I like my happy Trunks x Goten fics, but that was just awesome! So well written; my favorite line was "game fucking over." I was really rooting for Goten! Anywho, I also liked how you characterized Trunks at the end. The whole thing was so terribly believable! I would definitely read another one.

i love it!

You are really talented, please keep writing

Lovely, dark and different. I would write more but my friend is pulling me out of my chair to watch Crocodile Hunter.(She's got some sort of wierd addiction to that show.) B

~And now he's grief stricken sobbing with his head on the floor... I won't be held responsible, She was touching her face. I won't be held responsible, she fell in love in the first place. For the life of me, I cannot remember what made us think that we were wise and we'd never comprimise...~ *Cries* All through reading your fic, that was playing through my head, plus the casual glimpses of the words "tainted love" Which described this all so perfectly. It moved me because, there are FAR too many "Happy" fics out there. I mean, happy ending through all the "Trials and tribulations" Then a happy author tries to write an angsty fic and it doesn't come out right at all. I loved this. I think I'll see what else you've written. (BTW: The song above is "The Freshmen" By Verve Pipe. I'm using it, that's it. It's going in a fic damn it! *Runs off to write and open birthday presents*

I love this. It's dark and dramatic. Is this just a one shot? Because it would be great if you could continue this somehow.