Thanks for the read bit confused but thanks

What the Hell just happened?

Haha, totally funny! I was really confused, obviously because I'm dutch, and I'm 16, so actually, this was kinda difficult to read. But yeah, it was nice, thanks! (I know I'm not 'allowed' to read this story, but I didn't saw it was rated as M until the car scene :).)

couldn't stop laughing :D

this is just sooooo hilarious !

makes me wonder what it feels like to be hypnotized

just great .. keep writing you're amazingat it ;)

Incredible story! I really enjoyed it! Brilliant!

Hilarious! Very well done. Write more!

awesome one shot i laughed like crazy towards the end.

How clever was this fic! You totally had me believing that she was either dreaming or hallucinating, it was so funny to discover that he'd actually hypnotized her. Really, really enjoyed this, is it a one off or do you plan to continue it?

that was weird... But well-done, I liked it :)

Hahaha! I love it sooo much!

This is really amazing! I seriously adored it :)

You had me as confused as you had Lisbon. lol It was all very interesting. Love how you came up with this plot. Took me some time to realize what had happened but I finally do. :-D Though I think I might give it another read just to be sure. lol Great writing. P.S. Jane hypnotizing her! ahaha Love it!

Wow. This is really great writing! You had me as confused as Lisbon was. Although him being so smiley and mysterious had me thinking he had something to do with it, I couldn't be sure. This was refreshingly original, and the car scene? Very hot. I didn't think they'd be able to have sex while being so injured, but I bet that was part of Jane's hypnotism ;p!

Hope to read more from you soon :)!

He hypnotized her. Oh my lord,that is hilarious. I adored this. :)

You made a GREAT job with the suspense. I absolutely love it!