I don't have enough words to describe the awesomeness of this story. Read it MANY times #NALEY forever and always.

Good story

Finishing up chapter 18. Some of the things from earlier are making slightly more sense, but then it continues to be disjointed. How can he be so in love with her that the amount of cheesiness is too much sometimes and he's so worried his game is suffering and then he just out of the blue knowingly cheats on her? Again, I can't see how the emotional arc of this will ever make sense.

So far to this point, I feel like the emotional arc is disjointed. It doesn't seem to flow and make sense. She is falling in love with him but doesn't want to marry him. He wanted sex from her at first but then he fell in love and proposed. I get this. But if they can get past the whole proposal thing they should be able to easily get past the bet ordeal. Also, Lucas would know his brother well enough not to think he was playing a game by this point. Also I expected the sex scene at least on Nathan's part to have some emotional reason behind it like he really thought it was over and he couldn't be forgiven so he just wanted to be with her before it was over just to take something with him when she's gone but then his explanation was simply that he was turned on and in the moment? So basically he is just a creep? Then Haley convinces herself that it's all been a lie even though he proposed and she knows she broke his heart? Then how can she think it's all a lie? Plus, now what's he ever supposed to do to get her back when making grand gestures and proposing has already been done and wasn't enough for her apparently? I'm just having a hard time seeing where this is going. I'm still
Interested to see if it somehow comes together

Ok so I found this story last night and I've finished it in a few hours time I love it so much!

Really good

I think I've read this story before. It seems really familiar. Once I'm done I will check it out. You know how it is, I've read so many stories on here that sometimes they seem to blur together...

I love it! I know this won't really help you but this story seems great. I can't wait to read more. I am so glad that it is complete so I won't have to wait. Your first story was great as well.

a very cute and sexy story. i loved how you tied Haley and Nathan's woes together capping them off with shower time. i'm not sure if you read your reviews anymore, but i for one did not want your story to end.

i love it!

so sad but oh so hot

I think you are an excellent writer but I don't think you should have made Nathan cheat especially with her life and the babies lives in danger you just put more pressure on them to die and to let Nathan do that at that time was awful if you wanted him to cheat you should have done it before/after their live were out of danger

Wow! I loved this story !
And I know I have a few OTH favs , but this is definitely one of my top favs :)
I love your style of writing and how you portrayed every character(:

Great work !

Woah ! I definitely was not expecting him to propose! :o
SHOCKER lol . I thought he was just gonna say ily to her. Lol
On to read the next chapter!

P.s , I love this story so far (;

Absolutely LOVE the ending...

Great story!