Those two are totally made for each other, that's for sure. Please update soon! It gets a little confusing when different people start to talk, but other then that it's really cool

So cute! I love fire couples!

Hilarious! Amazing. The two hotheads then? Muahahaha. Update.

lol, LOVE the bike. That will give her points in Warrens eyes.

Fantabulous! Just sayin. I really honestly, truly like it. Cant wait for more! Please update soon!

Ok I'm debating if I should tell you

A. How much I love u at the moment bcuz you updated

Or

B. How much I hate you at the moment bcuz u mad em and lyra seem like total blonde bitches who scream and stuff( would I ever do that, seriously)

Then again, you can always make it up w/ updates( and a fight between )

A bit rough to read, but potentially a good story. If you work on it (as you said in the summary) it can be great. )

Who's Celia? Why was her name randomly put in

awww Pagan sounds so cute :)

Did you fix the grammar like I did on the sheer

Love it