Great story. I'll admit a lot of it was wish-fulfillment for me, as I am a fan of Henry/Fanny, as well as a sucker for happy endings-but hey, this is fanfiction. Thanks for sharing this!

Just finished fhe last chapter you posted and i know it has been a few years but i hope you pick this back up and finish it . This is by far one of the best henry and fanny stories I've read .
Waiting with baited breath,
An avid reader

Please tell me you are still planning on finishing this!

More! I so hope you can com

Love the beginning, though I like Edmund... But since I hate Mary and don't think that Edmund and Fanny fit nearly as good as Fanny and Henry

Truly wish you would finish this story.

Please more

Interesting developments! Good job!

"Claim on her"? He doesn't have a claim on her.

Please continue this story

I would love to read some more! I'm a big fan of henry and fanny!

It seems like Seul is jus unsure about accepting Julia or trusting her. I thought Seul was just planning revenge. And Susan seems selfish as hell! Mary is also a self centered, greedy,insuffarable b!tch! She deserves to br unhappy as a clergyman's wife. How does Edmund put up with her? He deserves it after what he did to Fanny. But Fanny is the lucky one with Henry. I hope she gets over her fear of Jamica(Jamaia)?

Finaly some HC/FP fanfic... Please, keep going! *-*

Mary made her bed, now she has to lie in it

oh no. Edmund was stupid, but she shouldn't pay his foolishness for the rest of his life. And Henry is still a libertine. There's a saying in a country in the Balkans that says "a wolf may change it's fur, but not it's habits"