great work

Bet Fate will still win the race even with the head start haha

Wow, I've just finished reading everything and I must say that I am very impressed with your work. The characterization and plot were solid, with each character - not just Nanoha and Fate - written in such a way that I could visualize them as though they were real, with their own expectations, bonds, hopes, and dreams. The setting of this story is also very gripping with its universe's rules being developed and expanded upon. This tale is indeed amazing! Your writing is fabulous and I've enjoyed reading this tale every step of the way. Thank you for creating this magnificent story!

This chapter would have been better if Nanoha actually had trouble deciding weather to pick between staying there taking care of her brother and going. I wanted to see her having a difficulty on picking family or going to the empress. I mean it would fight with how much her family is suffering and all that you think she would have difficulty here on choosing, but no it makes it seem like she don't give a damn about her brother or family at the moment by actually excepting even though we know Nanoha isn't like that.

Anyways stories great, but this chapter could have use a struggle between her decision.

Have to say very nice Story. I had fun reading it. It was different in a way, but very entertaining. I did feel that Nanoha was a little weak. It be nice if someone made her godly strong.

Having read through it all, all I can say is wow. I love how you managed to take all the characters of the first season, A's, and Strikers, along with some of the events, and make them all fit into a story set in a different era without any of them feeling out of place or forced in just for the sake of it. Also, tiny little Agito trying to protect Rein and her interactions with Signum are just the cutest things ever. And finally, all my gay ships being adorable! Yay! *sprinkles Skittles everywhere*

You know if you were a boy
I will just marry you!
Your story are so awesome

I'M SO READING THE SEQUEL RIGHT AWAY.

Ahhh!
AHHHH!
Need epilogue!

Aw! Arf! What a sweet chapter this was.

SO cute.

So awesome! So exciting! So cute!

Aww geez. This is looking like it'll be a very moving story. You write really well.

I will never get tired of reading this

So great story I really love it and the use of Japanese words as well not many people do it well but you really have, and just in general the story is great though I wish there was a little more NanoFate fluff at the end but otherwise great story.