Interesting, but I'm curious, will Crona have a big part in this? I hope he doesn't get killed or something.

I really hope that the chappie comes soon

I feel like this is exactly what would happen if Asura had won and I like how you've written it. It's almost heartbreaking! I'm happy to see that Maka has gotten the will to live back! Yay! Can't wait for the next update!

I luuuve it! Please update soon! This is my current favorite story!

Really good story. Hoping to see another chapter :)

And I hope you will make it really interesting since this is only the beginning :)

"Don't waist my gift..." Needs to be fixed.

Still. Cant wait for more! Hope to see more soon, and more importantly, escape!

I had read the three first chaps of this story a long time ago, and I found it again today so I managed to complete it.

I have to say the plot is very nice and the story itself manages to give the reader many empotions. I love the whole concept you invented, really. It's wonderful. The grammar/syntax mistakes are what slightly ruin the whole thing, though, unfortunately. But I'm sure it's something that can be corrected :)

I'm really curious as to what will happen in the next Chapter, and so are all your other readers, I'm certain. Hope Maka isn't dead, though... :(

Anyhow, I see you haven't uploaded something new in such a long time, and I wonder if you've given up with this story.. I really wish not, for it's one of the stories I enjoyed reading most, and I really want to see how far it will go. So, if you ever see this message, just be aware that we all await for this story with lots of impatience. I hope you are still on this, it's a pity for such a good story to remain uncompleted like this.

Oh, and if you want any help correcting your mistakes or maybe a few tips on how to improve your writing, you can always ask. Don't take my words to offense if I said something inappropriate, I meant nothing like that. :)

Keep up the great work. You're pretty good at writing and I hope I'll see more of your works, along with your improvement!

Have a good day.

...what happens next? is maka dead?

OoO MAKA!

Oh Noes, Kishin destroyed her soul. Now all that's left is that little bit in Soul?

OMG! Don't make me wait too long or I may die from anticipation D:

i await the next chapter until then have fun with your book

stupid suspense...makes me want more

that didnt quinch anything, that added too it. did you just kill Maka?

Ahhh no I need more updates! Too interesting-don't leave for too long!