bittersweet, but great story!

So beautiful. It made me cry. I think this would be his reaction

So beautiful. It made me cry. I think this would be his reaction

wow that was so full of emotion! it was so beautiful! thanks for writing .

Wow, I love this. You definitely feel James' pure fear, how sure he feels that it's the last time he's going to see her, and how much he loves her. It's beautiful, wow.

This was beautifully written and the emotions were so raw...Loved it. :]

Awwe. Lily and James are just...unrealistic. In a good way, I mean. They're just...amazing. And this brought out those qualities perfectly.

Wow, that was very intense and extremely well-written. James' reaction and feelings were so utterly believable and just... wonderful.

Oh... Just... Oh...

That was amazingly beautiful. Wonderful. Ahh. I don't know what to say. I'm speechless.

Just beautiful.

Sigh.

I would love an update when she comes back from the mission... but I'm quite content with that as a standalone piece.

Please continue the beautiful and emotive writing. Pure talent.

Love from PurpleLight