Hell yes! Awesome story, you are a fantastic author!

Canderous and Bastila - Sitting in a tree... Haha

So sad! well I guess more bittersweet.

Dustil is awesome, trust him to have a since of humor while Ash is off to face Malak

They kissed! finally LoL

"Dad!... Your girlfriend is depressed again!" "Don't kill my copilot." This story is to perfect!

This story needs more reviews it is flipping awesome! I don't think a have seen a better character then Ash. She is bad ass!

I'm glad someone finally thought ahead to save the jedi, I wonder if they will take Ash's advice. Hopefully more Carth moments ahead!

I love this story, Ash is such a great and powerful character. She is just how a hero should be, and her personality is definitely something that I can see Revan being. I also love the little details: pranks on masters, warrior woman, sharp wit, mom in all but name, balance of light and dark, and she even gave Jolie her bed roll. Amazing character and story!

The republic should be dead. But as much as I hate to say it, Revan couldn't be allowed to succeed. I'll have to let the Sith do it.

The darkness is easier. And if you can do the same amount of damage with less effort, you are more powerful.

Using the light? Pitiful. Even at Revan's weakest, on the Foundry, there were still traces of darkness.

Revan made no mistakes, besides trusting Malak. Or trusting the jedi. But I meant before he/she was brainwashed.

The greatest flaw of KotOR: you can't kill those damned selkath! I wanted to rip the life out of them sooooooooo badly! :(

loving? Well, if it isn't the 5th or so story that had the two in looooove.