Woohoo!

Nice!

I like it! :D

Oh my God this is FANGtastic!
Absolutely my favorite story ever...
Sequel PLEASE :-)

I am absolutely in love with this short story! Your use of adjectives and vocabulary put a vivid picture in my head, while also making the story humorous and light-hearted. In my opinion you fit the characters personalities perfectly. And the plot?! I was practically drooling throughout the whole story, the plot is amazing. I don't have any complaints about this story, except the shortness of it. I would have loved to see this short story turned into and astonishing chapter book. But I'm not going to push you into doing anything, I am satisfied with this short story!

This was amazing I love you!

I like the use of the mythology here

This would make an amazing chapter story, but nonetheless, this was still beautiful! :D

Well I quite enjoyed this one shot. It gave enough back story to satisfy the question of how they got together and it was one of the most original things that I have read in quite some time. I honestly had never pictured Naruto with his mate in any other instance. He was a tinge too girly at his end. however Sasuke and Hinata seemed as in character as one could be, written as the demons they were. It might have gotten a better following if the tension that Sasuke feels was brought more into the light. I do wonder if the marking is different for the species of demon though. Does Hinata need to mark Sasuke differently/as well?
I hope this gift was enjoyed as much as I have, thanks for sharing.
RenataZ

sasuke : I'll take my woman when I want her.
Hinata : Sasuke-sama? * innocent face * "
sasuke : I want her now.

me : SAUCE-FRIKING-GAY YOU PERV!

:3 nice :D

i love it!

I loved it! I am more for cutesy scenes myself but you did a great addition of lust in here...a good amount so I am very pleased. I was worried - because it was rated M - that I would be reading Lemon but I'm glad I didn't. (I'm not a Lemon person heh) ;

I love SasuHina and I like your descriptions and the idea was good as well!

I found this one-shot due to a picture on deviantART dedicated to this. I like this a lot and it definitely helps my SasuHina fangirl mind.

I was amazed to find Temari as Naruto's mate, but in a way, I could see why; though, since I like SasuHina I accept NaruSaku if anything but the amount of Naruto and Temari in the story was a good touch.

Awesome job! :D

I liked this one! I really wish it would have gone further... and i don't mean into lemon territory, but... This idea is a great one and could have been made into... like 12 chapters!

I still absolutely loved it though... i guess it s the fan girl in me that wishes for more XD I had plot ideas running through my head while reading this... I really loved it

That was simply amazing! So gorgeously written, I absolutely loved it. You managed to write a supernatural fic with not only SasukexHinata that is both fluffy AND sexy? Hun, that takes skills. Seriously, and the fact that you made NarutoxTemari work is astounding in itself. It's thanks to you I can say I ship it now. Well done all in all~!

Liked it a lot, great story.

This is a really good story. Very different from ones I've read so far. Awesome job!