| Reviews for The Black Manta |
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   snow eopard chapter 1 . 11/10/2013 Okay so you need to give me more,there is only so much suspense a girl can take |
| Jeri252 chapter 8 . 8/14/2011 love it |
| leelator chapter 8 . 7/8/2011 Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve when you get back to it. ;) |
| leelator chapter 6 . 6/5/2011 Honey, I know you've been tinkering around with this a bit and I don't know if you plan to rework the beginning some more or not. I hate to admit this but I am totally confused. I don't know what the heck is going on and I really want to. I think you have such a nice writing style. It's clean and crisp, but there are so many plot lines and characters (some with multiple names) and constant scene changes that I'm really floundering trying to keep up. Adding in the fact that only one chapter is posted at a time and it becomes even more challenging to follow. Maybe you could give us a synopsis at the beginning of the chapters or streamline things a tad? I think it might make it easier for your readers. Sorry not to be more help. :/ |
| BnayyFF chapter 7 . 6/4/2011 love love loved it. of course you already know this :) and I'm always happy to help! can't wait for more! |
| jharv241 chapter 7 . 6/4/2011 Man I am confused with this story. Alice comes to warn Bella that Edward works for the company that she is representing...okay is that good or bad? I know that James and the other crew is setting Bella up to get back with Jacob to get their hands on the Black Manta is that correct? I hope I am following this story correctly. |
| twilightlover212 chapter 7 . 6/4/2011 i do agree the plot is thickenning! Please don't take so long to update again! |
| jharv241 chapter 6 . 5/19/2011 What is going on in this story? I think it has something to do with the "black manta" and it involves Jacob, but they need Bella to make Jacob do something. Am I right? Are the Cullen's back to warn Bella? |
| jharv241 chapter 5 . 5/19/2011 Outstanding job on this chapter and kudos for your imagination for the "W" lounge. I wonder who hit Jacob and were was his boys at? |
| jharv241 chapter 4 . 5/19/2011 I am really liking this story. Definitely different from what I'm use to reading and I like it! |
| jharv241 chapter 3 . 5/19/2011 Okay I think you are definitely drawing me in with this story. |
| jharv241 chapter 2 . 5/19/2011 Interesting story will continue to read to see where it is going. |
| jharv241 chapter 1 . 5/19/2011 Okay you have peaked my interest with this story, I will most certainly will read more. |
| hufflepuffpride21 chapter 5 . 5/18/2011 alice? Hmm...this story is brewing! i like, I like! |
| Sams Taz chapter 5 . 5/17/2011 I am enjoying this story very much! :-) I love the plot twists and turns. I will definitely continue to read! |
