| Reviews for My Other Half |
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  Iloveanimals chapter 31 . 9/8 You are a great writer. This is a very imaginative story. Please update soon. |
 TrillionSchiffer chapter 4 . 6/30 None of this makes sense. Should've just left it at 'old friends who havent seen each other in a long while'. People could fill in the blanks from there. Because clearly you were more than friends. But if you say, you have been emailing one another, but DON"T KNOW where the other lived... that destroys your explanation. Secondly... first day and a girl gets carried off bridal style after a huge PDA make out session... they are going to label her SLUT. Sooo there is that she is going to have to deal with Or 'should've' had to deal with I should say. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/22 Wow! No gentleman in that pack. 4 wolves against one small woman. Vampire or not that's wrong. Cowards. |
| Iloveyousully15 chapter 7 . 2/19 I love your story! It always makes me laugh whenever i read Jacob trying to warn Bella away from Edward saying, “the Cullens aren’t like you and me.” Like excuse me but only one of us is an actual human here lmao! |
| Guest chapter 23 . 10/29/2019 Bella is 18. She doesn't need Charlie's permission for anything. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/27/2019 Love it. Glad he got to them before he could be stopped. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/4/2019 Aw just a little while longer. |
| Guest chapter 21 . 4/8/2019 That was awesome. I think that's my favorite chapter of all. Why would Charlie think Bella would be comfortable around people that poisoned her? How can he still be friends with them? Does he care about his daughter really? What a pitiful excuse for a father. |
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/20/2019 That was awesome. Of course she could have smacked Jacob against a tree or rock a time or two or six before throwing him away. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/20/2019 Carlisle is to much of a pacifist. Would he be so forgiving if it was his mate? Treating those that plotted against his family. Always insisting they follow the treaty when the wolves break it over and over. I would really like to read a story that dealt with Carlisle being such a push over, the wolves & tribe, and even overbearing father Charlie. Info really like Bella handling Jacob & Edward visiting the rez. |
| Guest chapter 21 . 9/13/2018 This story is awesome. I love that Bella doesn't associate with the wolves and can handle them. Especially Jacob. |
| Vamp-Princess09 chapter 31 . 8/31/2018 OMG it has been 6 years but I have hope that you will finish this story plz. We are waiting to see what happens next. |
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 3 . 4/13/2018 Damn... where is your story building? Damn... no caution at all huh... just going for gusto... Do you even care if the story makes sense, or was the goal just to put words on paper? |
| TrillionSchiffer chapter 1 . 4/13/2018 LIke the 'waste no time' scene. But damn... |
| Kerrion chapter 31 . 1/8/2018 Please come back and finish this. |
