| Reviews for One Little Change |
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  Guest chapter 3 . 6/16/2019 Finished reading the whole fanfic. Disappointed to say the least, it could have been a great fanfic, if you took it slow. For example, start with how he ended up as CJ, and follow up with 2 or 4 chapters on the Bones gang. Maybe solve a murder? Then he goes to hog warts with specialized tech. Also while I completely disagree with you on the matter of Luna. You said that you wanted to introduce her quickly and all but going to fast can muddle the fanfic in my opinion. You could have started it with CJ sitting at the Ravenclaw table and ignoring his housemates possibly. Then after 3 chapters or less, have him stubble on Luna getting bullied by Cho Chang. Luna is nonchalant but CJ is pissed and teaches them a lesson, they become friends and way later on in the fanfic he can say he thinks of her as his sister. Because you didn’t do this, it confuses the readers and cheapens the fanfic. I mean CJ just sat down, started talking to Luna, defended her from Cho Chang, brought her to a room, punched a guy for her and then proceeds to sleep. If you slowed down after that, the fanfic would be okay, but instead of doing so, you worsened it by speeding up the romance, I mean no classes or anything, not even a moment where he dribbles upon Marcus or something, or a moment where after meeting Marcus he realizes he’s the mate Luna was talking about. You just kept going. My suggestion at this point would be to rewrite or delete it, it’s really bad, I’m being totally honest. |
 Lucky Lucy Heart chapter 11 . 4/7/2019 PLEASE UPDATE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story! The plot is AWESOME and your writing is AMAZING! I can’t wait to read the next chapter and I hope you upload it SOON! |
| deathwearsblack chapter 11 . 3/6/2019 Please update when you can. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/25/2019 KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ |
| Nerdlover101 chapter 1 . 1/28/2019 PLEAUSE UPDATE! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/31/2018 Please update |
| Starhunter18 chapter 1 . 9/15/2018 more please |
| Trisha85 chapter 11 . 7/16/2018 More please |
| Love2read23 chapter 11 . 7/14/2018 Oh man, what a place to end! I hope there's more. I thought for a moment that this was some elaborate plan of Voldemort's for the rebirth ritual but guess that's too far for him. Thanks for writing. I love CJ. The instant bond with Luna was confusing but cute and Marrd cus amd Harry are adorable. |
| jamie.huntington1 chapter 11 . 5/7/2018 Hope you continue this story |
| PrinzessTinkerbell29 chapter 11 . 4/10/2018 Update ssssssssoon |
| BookFan96 chapter 11 . 2/10/2018 I wish that you had continued this |
| yngoldfogee chapter 11 . 1/11/2018 Are you still around? I don't like thinking of this story being incomplete and abandoned. |
| MagamiNekia chapter 11 . 9/16/2017 please update I would love to see what happens next. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/12/2017 KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ |
