cute.

the ending resolves the story without being too cutesy. Because yu mentioned it and did not dwell on the emotions.

This is adorable. I loved it.

Lovwd it :)

Liked this.

Very sweet. I love the comparison drawn between Eliot and Sam...and Nate's other kids, of course. ;) I love the whole Eliot passage, especially the last two paragraphs. Thanks for sharing!

so sweet. though i can only imagine that eliot's thinking 'what the hell'? i loved the connection you made to the thoughts.

I really like the second part. It's very touching how you manage to draw a connection between Nate's past and present and a very believable interpretation of what fuels his feelings for his team in the circumstance of injury. Compared to the second part, the first part, in my opinion, pales a little - I think it could have been shorter; you're giving two examples for why Nate feels the way he does while one (the one with the swimming pool) might have been more intense. But this is really just a small point - the idea of Nate taking care of Eliot and memories of Sam interweaving at the same time is beautiful. Good job!