Kudos, brownie points and...job well done, Isabella, I sat and read this one sitting...fantastic story!

I'm so glad that this story is being finished. I loved the first one and I am loving this one. Thanks for writing it.

From the first chapter, I was hooked on this story, I couldn't stop reading it at all! It made me feel so manh different things, anger, happiness and sorrow. The epilogues were extremely sad, the last few lines of this made me burst into tears. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story!

it was a beautiful story :)

and the end was the best possible. i hoped so much that all the 3 will end up together and was really sad that alistair had to be with anora.

thank you for the great story. i hope that you will make more like this 1 in the future :)

It's been a while since a story has made me laugh and cry in equal measures quite this much! It was a joy to read and I'm sure this is one of those stories I will revisit again and again! Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent *hugs*

I was afraid you where going to leave him all brain damaged! XD

Holy shit monkeys!

so now i'm wondering how Al will take finding out that his brother wan't her too. I'm glad their able to be friends now though. That not something I was exspecting but it's been nice to see!

Worried about the meeting!

I struggled all day to get my little mosters settled enough so I would be able to come back and finish this chapter. It was worth the wait. I love how discriptive you are about her dress and it was fun to read about her challenging her brother. I have to admit that I'm rooting for Al to poor through. I like Tristen best but I hate for Al to be stuck in suck a funk!

I keep wondering how Nathaniel is going to react to this? Does he still carry a flame for her? hmmmm. So fun!

I really love your Tristen! /sigh... I'm trying to come up w/ my PC guy for my first fanfic... Right now my OC is romancing Cullen (hehe he's so cute) But later, I wanted her to go for a steamy, slightly wild dalish hunter who is kind of more aware of what he wants and how to get it if you take my meaning! Anyway, Your Tristen is just awesome!

Evil Alistair! I laughed myself silly till your man reminded my how painfully sex he is /fans self. I love this twist. I can't believe I only just found this story but on the other hand I'm secretly thrilled that it's already complete... It must be my early Christmas present or something. Fate, she's a tricky whore huh? I'll try to review every chapter cause honestly after "attempting" (and I stress that word) to write my own little fic I can't tell you have put a lot of time, effort and love into this. So thank you! It's a blast to read!

Oh my sweet baby jeebus on a cracker!

A man of intelligence, a man who isn't afraid to live life to its fullest, and embrace all that life has to offer. But enough about me…

You've just made my day :D

first of all, forgive me for any grammatical error. English is not my native tongue

I've read several of your stories, and I can't help to notice that you like a plot where the main character's partner nearly got amnesia (or already did in your 'disarray'. Wicked story by the way, LOVE IT! Please don't give up completing it...)

Anyway. The part where Tristen nearly lost his memory and Alistair came to help him in his dream is a bit flat for my opinion. I personally wouldn't mind seeing (reading, in this case) Alistair impatience seeing his hopeless amnesic brother and threatening Tristen about taking Sabrina back if he fails to remember (or will it be too cheesy that way? I don't know. I'm a hopeless romantic)

I also notice some part of this story in 'disarray' chapter 9 if I'm not mistaken? When tristen make a move towards sabrina after their dance together in highever. (maker I'm writing a wrong feedback for a different story here. I'll make my amend and go straight commenting that part after this) You really know how to please a fan :) I imagine people who reads this story first then disarray would have smiled at that. I know I will. Pity I've read this story the later.

Oh and about Alistair, good job there at manipulating your readers opinion about him. You've messed up my mind from adoring him, loathing him, pity him then back to salutation at him especially in the last few chapters. (And here I thought I'm obsessed with Alistair so bad nothing can ruin my adoration towards him) Hats off for you :)