Harry should've taken the baby far away from Sirius and never looked back.

I love this story!

James, Lilly and sirius black deserve to suffer

Can you write the twist too?

I love it but my sadistic side was hoping that Harry would be skittish around Sirius and that Sirius would really have to work to earn back Harry's trust. I would love it especially if he got drunk and that freaked out Harry, even if he didn't do anything to him

You had me cry in buckets... TT at 2 Bloody AM
Mom thought I broke up with my lover... Even though I had none. But what the hell! Why'd you do this to meeee?! It's so good.

I can't sympathize with your Sirius. He deserves to be in Azkaban. There are several moments when I want to crucio him. Harry's too forgiving. I would have killed him for almost killing me along with my baby.

Oh my GOD!
I can't even read the next chapters right now because I feel so nauseated. It's just bad romance, in fact I wouldn't call this romance at all. If trying to portray this as twisting as possible is your goal, I say you've succeed.
For the characterization, well I would say you just invent a new twisted and evil character and then just sicked the name Sirius Black to him. I'm just going to refused to think of him as a version of Sirius, for the sake of my mind.
But well, story-wise I don't mind it, you're doing a great job about it, too, you know?
So, the point is I want to say the story's plot and direction that it's going to take from this point onward has the possibility to be great even though I don't read it yet, but depressing as hell.
I can't.
I need some time before I would even consider to continue this or finish it though. I always love SB/HP, but not this way, not at all.
Any ways, thanks for sharing

Because my comment in the current last chapter got cut:

I hope you post the last chapter (alternate ending) still! It's horrible of me to hope you write another alternate where Harry doesn't survive after; I just what to see what you'll put into the table when that news does hit. I want to see what you would make Sirius be if that ever happened, what the reactions of Lily and James and what the Pureblood society (or Wizarding society) would put on the newspaper.

I hope you post the last chapter (alternate ending) still! It's horrible of me to hope you write another alternate where doesn't survive; I just what to see what you'll put into the table when that news does hit.

Jack... Self insertion much? What a Mary Sue.

Meh. That's all I have to say of that ending. Should have let Harry die. Let his eyes slip closed and his pulse slow to nothing until everything is still and dead in that bedroom. Ball gag still between his slack lips while Sirius drinks himself into a pity party blackout in the next room. Let Sirius come back to that mess, and face inquiry. Your ending was depressing in a gross way. Everyone who sucked won.

Damn Harry... If I were him, I'd rather kill myself than be with someone like Sirius...

I don’t particularly like this. It’s never adressed at all that Sirius took advantage of and raped Harry, for months. It’s realistic I suppose, but very unsatisfying and it leaves me with a bad feeling, with Harry falling in love with his rapist. It’s deeply uncomfortable. It feels as though Sirius will get away with no repricussions for what he did. As I said, it is realistic because rapists often don’t get punished. But it is still deeply uncomfortable, especially because it doesn’t seem like the author wrote it this way to make it realistic. Honestly, the thing that I dislike the most about this work is that it feels as though the author roots for the relationship despite Sirius’s horrible actions. I understand that it’s fiction and doesn’t reflect the writer’s views nessicarily, but as said at least thrice it is deeply, deeply uncomfortable and it doesn’t seem like it was intended to make the reader uncomfortable which makes the feeling even worse.

Damn that fist chapter hit me hard i felt so trap and cornered i had a few tears cuz fuck that was mess up .

In the end why did draco laugh ? Like did he go crazy but then the mom said it was a pure laugh? But it was written as hysterical laughter? No?

Idk anybody know?