This was a great fic! I am super glad I found it. (yes, even if it's not complete)

i just read this entire story as fast as i could! it's sooo good! i mean it wrenches at my heart but then melts me at other times lol. IT CAN'T JUST END THERE! After everything they both went through, that can't be what ultimately end peter's life! they need their happy ending together!

Wowza. This is really good! I dont know why you stopped and it was a really long time ago but you HAVE to continue this story, you're so far along as it is! Please? :)

What the hell is it? I love it.

found this and read it in a oner. Fabulous dark characterisation.

I REALLY should've re-read a few chapters as a refresh before reading this last update. I went into it, cold, having just skimmed Chapter 14 and my brain confused this story with Inferiority Complex. Which kinda ruined the continuity for me.

Anyway, this kinda came outa left field for me. I'm happy that you're still inspired to write more for this story, as this is my favorite of all your Fringe works. I don't know how you pick up the mood and characterization from where you left when you write so many other stories and fandoms, but I love the constant push/pull relationship of Peter and Olivia in this story.

The hole monster thing kinda threw me for a loop. For some reason, I got a "The Fog" vibe out of it. Not the original, the remake. With the whole tearing a hole in a dimension thing. The monsters in that movie were pretty horrifying, so that's what I pictured with Peter. Yikes.

Looking forward to what comes next. I soooo have no idea what the heck you're gonna do next. Which is a good thing.

Bloody frakking hell... that ending just made my heart explode.

The very opening in itself drew my interest, and the foreshadowing that you had in that first section was brilliant, and here I didn't think that you'd come full circle with that until a later chapter (but the fact that you did is even better).

I loved how you described Olivia's feelings when she's with Peter; it's nice to see that happiness in her after all that she's been through.

I love this whole paragraph:

"He finally looks at her, and all that hate and anger she's been sending him stops and drops off like the ledge itself, crumbling around and becoming a puddle at her feet. He's staring so openly at her and she can read everything in his baby blues, liquid and swirling. He's begging for her approval like he can't live without it, like it's air. She's never seen him so desperate for her to agree. He's holding her gaze and she's watching as his fingers are fumbling with the last of the harness clips. Carefully she stands up and comes over to him. He's watching her every move like a frightened dove, and she is a lion, coming over to see him. She smoothes her fingers across his chest and stares at him."

- that whole thing is just beautiful, absolutely wonderful imagery and emotion; I love it :D

The creature itself was bloody terrifying; what the hell was that thing?

Then Olivia gathering up her broken Peter in her arms was heartbreaking; I just wanted to hug her and try to help Peter.

This chapter was done so very well; the emotion and tone were spot on and I loved it. Please write more soon.

CP7

Fantastically written and totally in character. Love it, live it, love it. Hope you update soon!

fuck my life (( i mean, their lives.

Fortune is a bitch when it comes to them.

As always, love it. "Waiting for the resolve to come".

That is a hell of a conversation, but it had to happen. It's interesting that things like that don't get addressed too often but when they do it's a good thing, because society needs to change.

That was hot...wanted a little more smut, but hot notheless!

ohhh I LOVE this :D Nina is one of my favourite characters as well and I love what you did here. That's such a neat idea for her and her double's lives to have become intertwined like that, and what I love even more is how that situation mirrors the triangle between Peter and the two Olivias in a sense.

Love it.

CP7

Your portrayal of the P/O relationship in this story is such a roller coaster, and that's what makes this so damn good. It seems there can never be perfect harmony for them, but since they're both so broken, it would be an impossibility. But you keep me enjoying the progression and the angst involved.

Still...confused...:/

Hmmm...I'm confused as to the order of events in this. :/