Hey, I really enjoyed reading the first half of your story, and now I'm embarking on the second.

Such a shame that Hermione couldn't come with. The Geminio charm would have been enormously useful in replicating Maglor's gathered tomes, even if the reproduced item wouldn't have had the same durability over time. (Well, you could at least replicate classroom books. Students cam be pretty hard on their textbooks, heaven knows.)

I know that the part I'm reading is already long done, but I can't help but muse on things, you know?
(The old /foreheadSlap "hindsight is 20/20" curse.)
I love that he's taught Gandalf apparition. Talk about useful! Gwaihir can't always be handy to save the wizardly bacon.

that is horrible! great job so far hope they slaughter him

disgusting pallando

shittt that is new

I wonde rhwooo

loving it

catch himmmmmmmmm

get himmm

when is he going to get bit in the ass is what Iw ant to knoww

hott damnnn

keep up the great work, loving it

hope he gets killedsoono

poison

hahahahaha

Great story so far, but where's the rest. It's a well crafted alternate history of this era of Middle Earth.

With that said, on to some constructive criticisms. I am noticing some issues in both posted stories of this AU with punctuation, or rather a lack thereof, when using apositives. Apositives are where some phrases, such as this one in my review now, should be separated from the rest of the sentence with commas before and after the phrase. This creates the appearance of run-on sentences and somewhat hinders readability. I would be happy to go over the texts and help with this if you like. Just let me know.