nice and slow... hot and heavy... just perfect! and very erotic.

Were you still writing "if only for a night"? I couldn't find the site you said it would be on.

Me gusto mucho la historia entre estos dos personajes
Nunca los hubiera imaginado juntos, buenntrabajo
Me hubiera gustado leer un poco más, pero fue muy bueno
Gracias por escribir

Holy fuck. I completely agree with the last review. No questions about it. Absolutely and unequivocally damn amazing.

holy fucking shit my mind is blown

It has been years since I’ve read such a perfect one-chapter story and my god, I bow at your greatness. This is a 12/10 story. The smut is god-tier holiness. I want to print this out so I can re-read it. Your writing is flawless!

Awesome! Keep up the good work!

Loved the story!

thats story was awesome it is now in my top 5 stories of FF

loved it you left me wanting more

I'm sorry about your deleted stories. I can't even put mine on because I have issues with . I'm sure if parents wouldn't let there little kids get on computers then the internet wouldn't have to kid-proof itself.

Is that site safe cause I tried to google you and it say that it could possoibly harm my computer. So I wasn't to sure. Oh and you definitly need to do a sequel to this story.

ah i love it so hot

well i fell in love with your story so please dont give up writing

Can't you continue this story? Please..? :)

Sara!

*wolf whistle* Good job! This is one of the better ones out there for this pair.