Interesting start, can't wait for more.

The only thing that I did not like is the implied Suzaku X Lelouch. I just dont like yaoi.

Nonetheless, i like the story and the way you write it.

Kallen X Suzaku is the my favourite pairing in Code Geass and I hope you will write more of it in the future.

Funnily enough, just last night I was reading stuff from Ender's Game and think that that's who Lelouch reminded me of, in a way.

I'm curious as to who the three people Suzaku was in love with were - two are obvious, Euphie and Lelouch, but the third...

(Though I am personally of the opinion that Kallen worked out Suzaku was Zero immediately after she saw him dodge bullets, which her lines to Tohdoh imply somewhat)