| Reviews for Family Affair |
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Edisto chapter 1 . 1/20/2011 I have a question for you: How can you not watch Castle after hearing about it every day? Actually I have a second question for you: Why would you put in the time and effort to write a fanfiction for a show you've never even seen? I don't mean for this to sound like a flame review, it's just really weird. Ultimately and unsurprisingly the characters are completely OOC. And did someone read this beta? Someone who has actually seen the show? But your spelling and grammar are good. |
ghost writer 77 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011 Haha! That was really good; you got the characters spot on. Not bad for someone who doesn't even watch the show ;-) Nicely done. |
Bleh chapter 1 . 1/19/2011 Research your topic better next time. |
MidnightIndigo chapter 1 . 1/19/2011 Heyo, this kinda rocked. Haha, they're funny. It was great, for not having watched the show. Once we make you watch it, I guess you'll get the stuff that's "wrong" (as in OOC or not canon) but it's all good. I can wait. One thing that you probably wanna change is that they aren't on a first name basis. They call each other Castle and Beckett. Except when Castle's really worried about her, in which case he calls her Kate. But that's it. xD Haha, I liked it though, it was awesome. NOW WE SHALL KIDNAP YOU AND FORCE YOU TO WATCH IT! Yep. We shall plan that. xD Love ya! I hope you're grateful too, I should be doing math homework! ;) |