'Although she had not known him long, it seemed so off for him to be motionless and so very still.' Best line!

Oh my gosh! I love this! :)

I love it! It's such an underrated movie! And this was great!

I just rewatched it and it was awesome!

Sweet

This is great! Keep up the good work!

this is awesome, I love it!

That was quite enjoyable. I'm glad you wrote the second chapter.

*flyingtackleglom* YAY! this fandom needs a tone more of this

If only it were long enough to see through Silvers reaction... good though.

This is great. You didn't try to put too much detail in the injury and make things unrealistically bad for Jim, and you kept great characterization. Ever consider continuing it?

You should continue this story! You have a bunch of story faves. and followers! So please update soon!

Please please please write a sequel for this!

It was an interesting one-shot. It seems incomplete, though. One would think his injuries would change some outcomes from the rest of the movie. It would be nice if you involved those. And, you have this listed as a Jim & Long John Silver story but there's no involvement or even mention of Silver. You should fix that. I opened this to read about those two characters so I found the ending very disappointing.

Sa!

This is actually a very good idea here. It hasn't been done as far as I can tell, and it seems you've put some thought into it if you've already got this first chapter done. I do hope for an up-date on this, despite your obvious hesitation to carry on with it.