love it! just like i loved the other story XD xxxxx

Nice fic so far. I think you should keep it Daneils pov flipping back and forth like that can be hard to read. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Hey T4L3R,

Great start to the story. Boy, who has the bigger issues when it comes to relationships - Daniel or Jack? Will they be able to get past their fears and live the life together that they deserve? Can't wait to find out. Thanks,lightnshadows

Wow :)

This is really well written, i've never tried reading a D/J slash before, always thought it might be a little strained, but this...

This is really natural, kinda hot too actually, adding it too alert, don't keep me hangin too long... ;)