Wow...such a lot of thoughts and emotion, and absolutely no repetition! I wasn't bored at all, either, though there was (obviously) no action whatsoever. This is a well-done exploration into Anakin's mind and heart. Thanks for a great read!

Wow, this was an incredibly powerful story. You really captured the innocence of young Anakin and contrasted it well with the cold exterior of Vader. I loved the little flashback and Vader's last reply to Obi-Wan, showing us that deep down he still thought about it, that there was still hope for him.

This showed the internal conflict in Anakin/Vader well, how he almost wanted to be redeemed. Good job!

Wow, this was very nice! Well written, and what an impact there at the end! I enjoyed this. Well done!

Nice one! You really captured that good guyness in Vader even though he's still the merciless killer on the outside. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Until your next story!

P.S. Do you like my new avatar? I crack up every time I look at it!

~charliebrown1234