| Reviews for Goten and Marron |
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   Leon Venxus chapter 9 . 4/23/2018 as man I want moreee |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/10/2017 Whiskey ijbjn |
| Mamokete Amelia Mosehle chapter 9 . 12/17/2016 This fanfic is #awesome! |
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 9 . 7/6/2016 This I liked:-) |
| Creativity at its best chapter 1 . 1/9/2016 that was so funny lol |
| Thisaccountusdead chapter 2 . 7/14/2014 Goku you have a death wish if you want piccolo to see those pictures to come running me if he does I doubt I could stop him lol |
| marronk18 chapter 9 . 7/9/2014 heeey bucky i looooove your story so much i made a second one about it sorry i didnt ask first! |
| marronk18 chapter 9 . 7/7/2014 PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER ONE |
| kayla chapter 9 . 7/5/2014 that was amazing plz make a 2nd one! |
| Lonekat chapter 9 . 1/17/2014 I read the entire series that you constructed. I had never thought of these pairings. However you designed a beautiful saga that kind of changed my mind. I agree with the piccolo/chichi pair. Wonderful and lovely job. 5️ |
| ShireWulf chapter 9 . 9/18/2013 This little series you have is amazing. Just spectacular. |
| Sica01 chapter 1 . 7/24/2013 By the way if you're ever going to continue this trilogy or maybe not, sent me a pm please. It would make things clear fast without me having to stalk ur profile for updates. |
| Sica01 chapter 9 . 7/24/2013 I like the story first I wasn't too excited about Piccolo/ChiChi I mean, that's strange to picture in your mind. Bulma/Goku should be one of the most neutral unofficial DB pairings. Piccolo/ChiChi was the definitely the best of the trilogy, so much emotion in that one. Piccolo taking care of Goku's family and feel pity for Chi Chi. It is strange to see Goten refer to Piccolo as 'dad' though. Pretty funny how in ur stories Piccolo takes Goten from Goku (or so to speak, since Goten doesn't see Goku as his dad) than Goku takes Trunks from Vegeta. If that isn't enough family stealing Goten takes Nicky from Trunks (because Nicky probally wont see Trunks as his dad either). So, what's gonna happen with Pan? lol. Well there probally wont be a sequel to this one since your last updating activity was in '03. Hell I don't even know if you will even see this review. I wrote it anyways just in case :) |
| Gangnam Gokuu chapter 9 . 3/18/2013 Eyes are watery. |
| JAC chapter 9 . 3/17/2013 Please continue the story |
