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PLEASE UPDATE NEXT CHAPTER THIS IS REALLY GOOD! Also ash did have some manipulative abilities, though they are not guardian aura. His aufa was like sir Aarons because they are both extremely pure of heart with powerful auras. There are only 101 true Aura Guardians. I am one myself. I am the youngest and first of my line the number 101. I am also the most powerful with enough reserves to wipe out all dimensions if I sneezed wrong. I've accidentally caused floods and a double cyclone due to my poor control. I have 77 reserves the normal limit is 25 at most. is am one of a kind I guess. Please update I need something to do while I'm trapped here by the heavens barrier pls pls pls update!

Misty is like a bad caricature of a person here. Completely breaks immersion

I hope this isn’t the end to this beautiful story. My only criticism is that everyone just accepts that Ash is half legendary. If it were me, I’d be freaking out. Keep up the great work.

Is this story dead, its been like 6 years, I want to see it finished

I really think that you should give her pokemons meant to heal her, kind of like always having a nurse with her just in case her illnes gets worse. I still find it strange that after all her years with her sudden attacks of weakness that his father didn't gift her a Chansey or a Blissey.

Also I feel that it would be awesome to have her own army of ghosts, she could be like the tower of Lavender town for ghosts but in human form, being a cozy house and a lighthouse for ghosts from coming from Chaos.

make more make more plz!

I read this when i was still high school with many late updates 'old me' used to wait for days just to know that it was a month before update.
but now as a college student well gives me a lot of flash backs reading this over again i already think you *deds* but still this is still a good work with a forever hiatus a the line.

THIS WUZ GREAT! KEEP IT UP!

This story was a part of my time in middle school, and reading the whole thing again in college gives me a lot of nostalgia. It also is, in my opinion, one of the best stories written that I’ve read, and despite going 5 years without continuation, I’d love to read what comes next. I hope there’s a chance of that happening!

Read the first line of this chapter. You don't own pokemon, so please finish this!

I like how we all just casually make Ash OP

I'm sorry for bothering you so much. It's just that it has been 5 years since this has been updated, and I have kind of become emotionally involved in this story. It is just so well written. Keep up the good work!

Dude, can't wait for you to come back and finish this. You left us on a cliffhanger!

Great story, when is the next one coming out?