That was incredibly fun to read. 99% better with the fluff and how intent Eric is on adoring Alan. Also, excellent reaction, Will. Give them a day.

Hehehe . . .

:))) OMG! I can't stop laughing! *getting short of breath*...

"pop. Aha ... ha.. toast?" Oh my Gods that was hilarious. You my friend are hilarious! Good job on this fanfiction.

I love this fanfic! And your author’s note too XD This is absolutely my favorite (AlanXEric) fic because of the tone, their inner thoughts, and the characterization. Even though this isn’t an angsty fic, you capture Alan and Eric’s views towards the Thorns of Death-and their jobs, and each other-so well. Their comments are just so precious! The way they interact is really funny and swoon-worthy. When they were splashing each other, it was just so-aww…I wanna see that apron! I bet Alan would look super cute in it too. “[Alan’s] lithe frame fit perfectly against Eric's solid body, as if he were made to be in his arms.” Yes! Oh gods, yes! They’re so perfect for each other that I just…can’t…even…The lemon is well-written and attractive. :3 Ha, I like the memorable use of olive oil. Yep, I can totally see Eric throwing his alarm clocks across the room; your headcanons work. Get your cute little ass in there and make your man some breakfast, Eric! That awkward moment when your coworkers interrupt you…yeah… (CHECK other works) I hope you write more AlanXEric fics. I’d like to see them interact with their coworkers the day after this.
Again, this is seriously amazing and adorable! I’m glad my OTP has a happy, smutty, funny fanfic like this. My inner fangrell is very pleased, so thank you! :D

I was wondering if i could get a word document of this? since has disabled copying and pasting, i can't do it myself, i only want it so i have a copy of it to read on my tablet when i have no wifi, i promise i won't upload it anywhere

Thank goodness I'm allergic to olive oil, because no I won't be able to use it without blushing! XD

OHMYGODITSTOFUNNY I CANT STOP LAUGHING

I'm pretty sure that everytime I go and eat breakfast this is what will come to mind ;) great story though, this chapter is my favorite!

wow, i'm quite sad... i haven't reviewed this fic D:
WELL, i must say this is by far the BEST AlanXEric i have ever read (too bad there aren't enough of them D:)
It was just... perfect! Great humour, well paced and.. well, smutty :P
LOVED it! XD

AHAHAHAHAHA this ending... Great story :) I love the frilly pink apron.

Oh god that last chapter... I mean, the sex was good but there is no beating that last chapter... :P

Ha! I loved it. Sweet and perfect.

Kyaaaa, that was so cuuuuuute! XDDD Your Eric and Alan are adorable, and I love how cutely prudish (without meaning to be) Alan is in this. That little "Oh! This is your shirt" line was the sweetest thing ever, and I love that he didn't even realize how ridunculously sexy he must've looked in that oversized shirt coming half-off his shoulders. XDDD So much delicious imagination fodder... thank you for this!

Hahaha! This was a fantastic little story! I loved the humor and the descriptions. Nice! :)