Any chance of this fic continuing? I really liked what you have so far...

You skip around too much. Even if the parts you skip are canon, it breaks immersion when it skips around. You should right the story fully out instead of assuming the reader will automatically fill in the rest instead of only focusing on what is written. Assume the reader hasn't read the book or that it has been a long time and that way you will always write it while being able to SHOW the reader what you are envisioning instead.

Wasn't Tracey talking about not coloring the whole house with the same crayon? This was directly after grabbing his robes, shaking him, yelling at him, and calling him stupid? This was already worse than anything Malfoy had done up to this point yeah?

this is a great story...but can it be just Harry/Daphne please...I just love that pairing...please no Harry/Ginny I cant stand that pairing...what about a plot about Sirius he can already have a child that he knows about with his wife but he doesn't know where they are since he was illegally imprisoned but he goes and looks for them and brings them home to ruin Dumbledore's plans right along with Voldemort's plans that way his son can inherit the title and be god brothers with him and Neville...I really want them to like brothers...that's just a suggestion...I think Tracy can get with Sirius son if you go with that plot

RUINED ! Basic grammar error jars the reader and upsets the whole story, which otherwise shows promise.

Should've is the contraction of "Should have". There is no such phrase as 'should OF'

Grest story

Great story! Hope its not abandoned.

are you gonna finish this?

excellent story

I just discovered your story and I liked it.

Any chance you'll finish it ?

Thanks for the great reading time.

Your story is great. I think that Harry with lots of friends makes much more sense that the cannon.
About more than one future wife for the hero, I think that are good options without the Lord Black thing. Maybe the Peverell inheritance. Or some unexpected maternal ascendancy. I know that you planned just a H/D story, but is your fault. Why you made Tracy so lovely? ;)
I hope that you continue this story.

Great story! Do you plan on continuing it?

harry daphne - great
harry is 11, ok, but being forced to grow up would make him different from your harry. ok, it is your harry and you can portrait him as you like, ...
story i a little bit rushed. take more time for your settings.

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I can't read this. Harry is too damn childish for me to sit through another chapter. "childish" for lack of a better word.

Constantly caught off-guard? Constantly rendered speechless? Constantly tripping all over the place. Who is he? Tonks mixed with a little bit of a first-year Neville?

If you had his life the same before Hogwarts, then he's had 11 years of being constantly yelled at by his relatives. Someone getting in his face wouldn't effect him if they are someone his age or anywhere near his height. He's not scared of his cousin, despite their history. That should be all you need to know.

Not to mention the whole naivete thing he has going. He's a psychologically abused orphan. Being naive is one of the first things to go in an orphan, especially an abused one. They don't accept hand-outs without questioning it first, they don't just open up to people, (unless they are physically abused) they don't allow those their own age to get confrontational with them without striking back.