BRRRRRROTHER.

I lol'd so very very hard. I do not care how old this fic is - the level of humor it just achieved garners a review.

- Kay

I'm definitely not toying with you. I enjoy reading this stuff!

I've really got to thank you for writing Snake/Raiden/Otacon interaction without the shonen ai.

I dunno why romance has to be in stories all the time. Bleh.

Nee..d a..ir.. *slumps onto the floor, rolling* a..ha.h...

Snake: Look, Otacon. A mass of writhing tentacles violating somebody’s personal space. Don’t you have a tape like this somewhere?

Yeah, I know. Two reviews for you by me in one day. I liked the first story so much I just had to come back and read another one.

I really enjoyed how the characters reacted to each other in this story. Some people don't pull that off very well. So far it looks like you can. In addition to that this story was written rather well and I was glad to see some more of that window related humor.

The comedy in this story flowed along nicely from one great scene to the next. I must also mention the Snakemobile before I forget to. That beast sounds like quite the ride. I actually had to go and do an image search for a Buick hardtop and when I saw it I -could not- stop laughing. Thinking about Snake driving that vehicle was hillarious. That car has enough personality to be a character.

My favorite part of the story was when Snake infiltrated the bowling alley. The bet over Liquid being at the bowling alley was a close second. Finally, the section with the elephant joke was fairly amusing. All in all, this is one of those stories that's just fun to read.

Impressive. Funny. Smooth. Nice work.

Take it easy.

Keep on writing.

“Five bucks says he’s there, waiting. A scrap of cuticle managed to survive and attached itself to some poor bastard, and he’s made his way here for the sole purpose of interfering with our plans to bowl.”

- *promptly keels over in the library at college, stared at by many students*

- Valentine Angel

You know, the sad thing is that Raiden has my sense of humor. I'm not a potato, either. ;D

Now I shall go back to playing Shanghai and restraining myself from giggling madly. Right on. ;D

hehe! yay! that was fun! after 16 full hours of MGS2, the mind doesn't concentrate on much else... (and i do mean 16 *full* hours)

*ROTFLMAO!*

I'm an idiot for missing this story! It's... so good!

Yaaaaaaayy!

Great story! - You are rapidly becoming one of my favourite MGS authors -

This was an awesome story from beginning to end! I loved the fact they went to the movies which is strangely ironic. I'll email you and tell you why. I loved the comments they made during the movie, especially the tentacle one. *LOL*

*ROTLMAO!*

That potato joke was... amazing! *sighs*

::Stares at computer screen with jaw hanging open:: Ingenious. You... are... a... criminal... mastermind. How? What? Ummm... ok. Byebye.

P.S. You should get paid for this.

(In Rainman voice) Uh a-are you taking any prescription medication? Don't be offended that's just my way of saying I love this story. I love the title of this chapter too! Those jokes were so incredibly bad they were hilarious.

Ahhhh...don't let it end there...hehe...brilliant...