more please!

Finish this story!

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Love the story, I randomly found this while I was doing another playthrough of KOTOR. Wish the game was this epic!
Though I do hope you'll continue the story :P

I wish this was still active. It would have been one hell of a story. Great job with whats here, anyway.

Aw wish this story was continued. It had a good tone. I like your Revan character too.

Did you forget that Bastila lost her lightsaber when she was caught by the Vulkers. It's sort of a sore spot for her and would make the other think they need to look after Bastila.

Anyway good story I rather like how it's shaping up. Always remember the cardinal rule of self inserts, "if your not going to change anything then why is your character in the story worth writing about in the first place".

Hey! Where did that 'next' button go? This is too fun a read!
If you ever find that feeling you had when you wrote this: grab that bull by both horns and pound some dirt- er, paper... Keyboard?... Um... More?

Hmm... How to put this...
This is awesome! I loved it right up until the update...date... But still awesome!
So many priceless moments! xD Well it gave me the best laugh Ive had in years, anyway... I know there is no chance of more, but damn you have one hell of an entertaining fic here. I think Taris has an aura of demotivation as my own attempt at somethink KotOR stalled there. :/
Before I ramble further: job well done, 7 out of 7 in awesomeness!

I like this story - shame that it appears to be abandoned. If/when you update it, I'll be excited to read the next chapter. Good job!

I love it and I hope ya can update soon

Lol aww you should totally continue this! It was quite hilarious! Especially the part where you slapped Bastila! That was the best!
You have quite a bit of talent in writing, and i would love to see this updated.
Following and favoriting

Ma'am uh, uh ma'am are you still alive? No offense, update soon

"Uh...don't look now it's a Mandalorian crack whore!"

I'm dying~! I'm so dying! That, THAT, was freaking hilarious!

This story is so much better than I thought it would be, no offence meant. Normally, people really, really can't pull off SI stories. But you have done WONDERFULLY. Honestly. I love this story. I love it.

Not only do I love Jess (technically, I think that would be you, so I mean this in a completely platonic, stranger-meets-stranger-and-thinks-they're-really-cool way), but I love how you've had her act so far. I give you extreme props for having her have, like, an eighth of a clue on how to fight: enough to know what to do and somewhat survive while doing it, but not enough to totally excel to Badassery straight off. I understand the whole keep-moving-or-you'll-start-thinking thing, but she's gonna have downtime sooner or later and I'm expected a breakdown anytime now, probably when they get the Ebon Hawk and are on the way to Dantooine. Or when they get to Dantooine, 'cause I don't think breaking down in front of the crew would be a good idea.

And I'm really, really curious about the whispering voice and the crazy, Dark Side chick. Really curious. You pulled that off especially well. Honestly.

So I really hope you'll update soon. I saw that you haven't updated in a while and, like I said, it's hard to find good self-insert fics, let alone wonderful ones. So, yeah. Please, please, PLEASE update as soon as you possibly can? I'd really like to see this story to its end.

Oh. And sorry about the novel. .

I just found this and read all seven chapters, starting yesterday.

This is great. I can totally see a SI using all those tricks you learn in other games.

As for the voice in Jess' head, sometimes I imagine Kreia's voice (ridiculous, I know), and sometimes I imagine Revan's. I can't wait to find out who it really is.

And I laughed out loud when she quoted those lyrics. My favorite lines too.