| Reviews for Pickup lines for Tsuna |
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   MysticRising chapter 1 . 10/3/2019 Funny. Towards the end it got... bad, real bad. But the 1st hibari line, 12 most beautiful things, was gold, and honestly can be used in a well written romance where the guy is enamoured and not prerelationship, but during it, like before a date or something. |
| To The EXTREME KHR EnmaFan chapter 1 . 8/28/2019 WHY HAVENT I READ THIS BEFORE? This is HILARIOUS AND OHMYGOSH I CANT. IT was cute in the beginning with hibari but then near the end I was wheezing! This is ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! (It’s been like 8years since you’ve posted this but I hope you see this) |
| Ciela Fullbuster16 chapter 1 . 4/27/2018 That MIND BLOWING **** JKBGJFCAGJGJKFGA! I don't know if it's because I'm an avid 1827 fan, but Kyou's lines were actually cheezier and more romantic than Mukuro's... Even got me rolling and jumping on my bed as I read Kyou's lines... It's killing me.. |
| fangurl63 chapter 1 . 3/27/2018 I give Hibari points for the first one. That was smooth |
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/11/2018 Very very funny. Please write more. Also this is from 2018 (or 1827). |
| Abigaming chapter 1 . 5/12/2017 Thank you for this beautiful piece of literature. |
| BlankCanvas624 chapter 1 . 4/8/2017 lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol XD sooooooo funny! |
| Skull1412 chapter 1 . 2/26/2017 This was so cracky but so funny! XD |
| Otpizer28 chapter 1 . 9/14/2016 This was awesome! DAYUMMMMM I LOVED THEM PICK UP LINES! AND OF COURSE HIBARI SEMPAI IS A PERVERT! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2016 WTF! 0_0 |
| Darkness7913 chapter 1 . 1/23/2016 I was laughing the entire time with Hibari and Mukuro's pick-up lines! And Tsuna poor Tsuna was in the middle of it the love! Tsuna is so moe he even had a senpai confess to him to bad Hibari chased him off! This was so cute i hope you'll make more :) |
| phantomlady13 chapter 1 . 10/2/2015 *giggles* LOL It's so...funny ! |
| J.C Jackals chapter 1 . 7/13/2015 YES! Sure this needed a few more full-stops, I still love this! It was so hard not cackling out loud and scaring the crap out of everyone home! I'm still grinning. Great job! I'm almost jealous, I'm terrible at humor. |
| 1827 chapter 1 . 6/21/2015 Wao... Reading this fic at 3am really wakes up my brain. I even woke up my sister XD THIS IS FIRST CLASS ENTERTAINMENT. I THANK YOU. |
| DecipherMe333 chapter 1 . 2/17/2015 That was the greatest ending EVER! xD |
