I am very sad. This storry seems to me quite logic, deep and real. Did I say it about magic? :) Well, it has touch of action, internal debate of people and a good proportion of psychology. Thanks at least for 21 chapters. However, I wanted to see, how Harry would develop his relations with many people and particularly with God-Father.

Please update you have a good story going on here. Focus more on their relationship. People would like that.

I adore this story. It had my laughing, crying, and smiling. I really hope you come back to this someday - it's such a novel concept and well executed. The writing is great, the characters well-defined and not at all OOC. I'm sad that it's unfinished, but you ended in a good enough place - readers can imagine the rest, I guess. Thanks for writing.

It really like how you've made Frank's death feel more important in this story than in canon, where it was largely just a plot device to demonstrate things about Voldemort and Harry's scar.

Frank was awesome here! I love how you used a preexisting character who logically would have been there to rescue Harry, but because he's so obscure, I totally didn't see it coming.

Love this idea and curious where you'll be taking it!

He is just a 15 year old boy, and only knows 4 charms, it is a joke that all his expelliarmus actually function, okey not a joke but... You are ruinning their lives once they go out in society, he should meka the timos by now, and just for making him save the wizard world, he should take toms offer... Well if he didnt just crucio him like a maniac

It's been a while since you posted. I am really enjoying this story. I hope you can continue it!

An interesting story and quite insightful. A great pity you have felt unable to continue with it. Perhaps you will be able to revisit it at some point.

… I'm speechless. This is amazing. I do hope you update soon.

is this abandoned?

This was really good! It was sad because I kept thinking of all the things that they two of them would have missed but it was really well writtern. I read it all in one shot and it was frustrating because I couldn't read fast enough! Please keep writing and upate soon!

:D

PLEASE update this! I've been searching for *years* for a fic that show Harry recovering from the trauma of the graveyard in a realistic way. I love it!

This story is very good, I love how the characters have depth, but I wish that Sirius and Harry were a lot closer.

I hope that you are continuing this because it is very good. :)

Hermione is getting more training than Harry... and Mrs. Weasley and Remus are annoying.

And Dumbledore is even more annoying.