| Reviews for The Abandoned Twins |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 4/8/2018 That was nice but when gonna be the next chapter |
 YokaiAngel chapter 4 . 11/17/2017 good luck |
| Tylerk7777 chapter 4 . 9/7/2016 When is the next chapter coming out and I love the article! |
| Tylerk7777 chapter 4 . 9/7/2016 When is the next chapter coming out? And I love the article! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/7/2016 continue the story |
| nick chapter 4 . 10/28/2015 R u done with this story or r u going to keep going? |
| Pikachu chapter 4 . 6/11/2014 AMAZING STORY keep it up |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/20/2014 Please continue if you |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2013 Gay there wasnt anything sexual about this story it nearly put me to sleep and yiur spelling is terrible |
| tpeeters12 chapter 4 . 5/14/2013 Great story so fare. Although I noticed in chapter 2 when you said there was incest, there wasn't true it got mushy between the twins at the end, but that's not incest or anything like incest, just sibling caring. Incest would have them at least huging in their undies with both showing sines of arousall (Leo with a tent in his underwear, Luna with hardened nipples with a wet patch in the crotch of her panty). Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward for the actuall incest (not implying I do incest, I just like to read it). Update soon please. |
| Reatssa chapter 4 . 3/29/2013 I want to see the Leo and Luna going at it |
| GamexReaper chapter 4 . 1/30/2013 please add moar! There aren't many Luna/Leo fanfics that are good like this one. D |
| deathqueen1000 chapter 4 . 9/24/2012 awesome |
| Digidestined Dude 15 chapter 3 . 8/30/2012 I checked online, and incest isn't illegal in Japan, it's just illegal for an incest marriage. So as long as they don't get married, GET IT ON BLUNETTES! |
| Hichigo's Devoted Follower chapter 4 . 3/6/2012 Dude hurry up and post the next chapter im lovin this story! |
