Aww so cute!1

goshlove this! Please please please update...

I love your writing style, even though at times I gotta re-read to understand I love the Rufus falling out with Marlene scene too.
Can't wait to see what happens. Interesting story. Please update!

Honestly Genesis, do you even KNOW how to deal with kids? Yeah, okay, it's safe to say that I feel sorry for any possible kids he has in the future if how he treats Marlene is an indication of anything.

I can't blame Marlene for being absolutely terrified of him. Genesis tends to be... ah... well... it's hard to tell anything with this guy. Hopefully, he's more sane than he was in Crisis Core.

I can just picture Genesis going through the building all badass
It's one of the things I live about your writing in this fic, it's detailed so I can easily imagine the scenes in my mind
And for the review thanks? It's no problem :D

D: way to leave me hanging!
I can't wait for the next chapter

I would really love to see more of this story

This is a really unique story. I like the way you write Marlene and am interested in reading more.

I really like where you're going with this. The only annoyance I have is that you refer the characters something other than their names too often. It gets a little confusing at times when I see "the burly man" or "the blue eyed child" and I need to translate that into names. I'm not saying you should stop altogether, but try not to do it so often ok? Other than that I think you doing great writing and I hope to see more soon!

I love how you got marlene's feelings about the nightmares across.

The whole chapter was well written.

(I actually always thought marlene's eyes were brown...)

Hmmm, this is looking interesting, i can't wait for you to continue :)