Reviews for Welcome to Hell
3 PoisenedKISS 3 chapter 13 . 11/6/2014
Adored this story, felt like going throuh a roller coster of emotions from morbid curiosity about the zombies to excitement for sakura in meeting other people to the feeling of dread when sakura (and admittedly myself) though t that sasuke , naruto and kakashi were dead :) Although i especially like your last two sentences of this chapter , i thought it was a really nice finishing touch.
3 PoisenedKiss 3 chapter 13 . 11/1/2014
I realise that you wrote this story like 2 years ago and you probably wont read this but I thought 'to hell with it I'll just write a review for you incase' I loved this story it was like a roller coaster with all the emotions and events of the story I love the laat paragraph or so of this last chapter especially where you said " Welcome to hell, please dont die, you never know what you'll find in the end" or something similar. :D
This Username Is Classified chapter 13 . 7/27/2014
Really good story!
VampireBlood1702 chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Wow, I'm a zombie fan too! And I like it a lot! You've inspired me. Now I'm definitaly writing my own soon :D *thumbs up*
rinablues chapter 13 . 6/20/2014
I just finished reading this...
Oh my goodness you are awesome!
I was literally on the verge of happy tears when I finished this!
NadiBooP chapter 13 . 6/19/2014
That was great! You guys did a spectacular job! This is one of the best zombie apacolypse romance I've ever read! Thanks for sharing! :)
Shadamyisthebestlol chapter 13 . 6/8/2014
Ending is on point I like it
Rei chapter 13 . 5/20/2014
Amazing AU. thanks for this!
Sins of Paradise chapter 13 . 4/30/2014
I can see this as a movie :)
sakura.souen chapter 13 . 4/26/2014
omg! I LOVED THIS STORY! it was amazing! could anybody please recommend stories in the same style ans SasuSaku please! it was really a such good story! Yeah they didnt die! :)
BoomPowMina chapter 13 . 3/5/2014
That was so good, its ammazing, i loved itttttttttt! The ending was perfect! Thank you so much for writing this
Guest chapter 13 . 2/23/2014
Ohh.. God best story on earth! No lie
yonnee chapter 13 . 2/2/2014
This is a beautiful story. I loved the whole idea, and damn, this was realistic. Maybe Ronald McDonald really will kill everyone. Whoa, what a creepy mental image.

I found the length of the whole story appealing-considering that it's only thirteen chapters-but I had a bit of trouble with your long paragraphs. There isn't anything wrong with it, you just need to divide some of them. I understand that you think that everything related to each other should be in the same paragraphs though it might be better, like I said earlier, to divide them. Give your readers some space for anticipated breaths. Insert dramatic pauses here and there for added suspense.

I also spotted some run-on sentences in there. Typos that weren't really typos were there too, e.g., barley (barely), etc. (I forgot the others .) And of course, the real typos.

Also, about Team 7's relationship, you'd have to add more scenes where their friendship grows stonger (aside from the badass zombie killing). Sasuke and Sakura too. Especially them. It would have been nice to see more interaction. I would have love reading about their overwhelming sexual tension, haha.

Ignore all my squirmishes if you would. I'm just a nosey, nitpicky passerby. Don't get me wrong however. I loved 'Welcome to Hell'.
Ellishia chapter 13 . 12/22/2013
I finished this story by 3am. I went to sleep and had some dream about it. I just woke up and here I am already typing a review without a brunch in my stomach. I hate you. I hate how you managed to make me so emotionally invested in this story that I lose my appetite because that's the way I am when I cannot move on from something.

It's been such a long long time since I've encountered such a feel-good ending. To think that the story is not even some kind of feel-good story. It's about zombie apocalypse for crying out loud. Though you didn't address the issue on how they're going to get rid of the zombies, usually I'm all up for nitpicking but you just gave me such a beautiful and satisfying ending that I don't care what happen to those zombies anymore. Tsunade could bomb the place for all I care. Then again what if there are other survivors hiding out there?

Anyways, I thought this was some kind of highschool/mob story. I didn't know you were literally talking about Hell. Or literally dead people. Lol. So I had my doubts because I am so over typical highschool stories with gangster Sasuke; I want a breather.

But I am such a huge sucker for hs stories that in the end I decided to read this. And please remember, I regret nothing. Though the story's not what I initially expected, the outcome is much much better. It's like you gave me everything I'd been looking for a story.

Kickass heroine who won't let anyone or any-it walk all over her (literally/figuratively), a Sasuke Uchiha who retained some usual Sasuke-qualities yet has some kind of character, Team7-ness, how you managed to successfully import some canon here and there and last but not the least, a plot that is actually page-turning. Or scrolling. Whatever.

Thank you. Thank you so much for writing such a work. Though there were lots of timeskips, I could careless honestly. It was also a great idea to switch to a first-person perspective for the epilogue. Really. Thank you.

I still hate you though. Making me so much attached to a short 13-chapter story. Huhu.
Ellishia chapter 10 . 12/22/2013
No Sakura's blowup was uncalled for. I've been honestly waiting for it since I witnessed Ino's attitude in the past chapter. She was too ignorant and totally deserved Sakura's rant.
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