I love how you capture a whole scene, making it seen more like we are watching it rather then reading it. Great short, thanks heaps for sharing

i know you aren't going to continue this, but it would be great if you did. their characters are portrayed wonderfully.

You and Bard rule

I loved the scene in Maura's closet. That was awesome.

And I just love Maura's thoughts during the time they're at the Dirty Robber. It's SO Maura.

Boss, love this story and think the back and forth from Jane to Maura's thoughts is genius and a genius way to incorporate you and the Bard's respective work. Thanks for another great fic! I could see a sequel to this...;)

Great, I loved it!

As much as I loved this I need an update on the "They could be twins" saga! Oh! And great colab ya'll!

Loved it. But are you guys really gonna leave it there? I think you two need to write some more chapters together. ;) No seriously. You are both amazing writers so for you to team up is a great thing for us readers.

This was awesome! Hope you continue it!

YOU GUYS! This was great! I really loved it...so creative and left a lot to the imagination...BRAVO!

AHHH LOVES :) hehe, i was really happy with the way this turned out, thanks again for ALL ur help! :)

LJBard