That final line is awesome.

Oh man, this has got to be my favorite SxS story on this site so far! The pacing and dialogue were just plain awesome. And I loved how you brought out Stein's undisclosed feelings for Spirit - that's totally the way I'd expect him to act. I also liked how you didn't rely heavily on Stein's crazy sadistic side, but instead portrayed him as a lonely, perhaps misunderstood human being, who's tired of running from his urges and emotions.

Squeal! Brilliant! Amazing! Fantastic and all of those other synonym. You got Stein and Spirit down perfectly and it is so Spirit to not notice Stein's subtle signs. I wonder if that is why Stein keep on jabbing Spirit for his hypothesis regarding Stein, because for all Spirit knows about him, he was still blind enough to not notice his love. The last part just had me squealing. You do have more fanfics for this pairing, right? Please tell me you do.

Blame it on poor Asura shame on you Spirit hehe.

I don't favourite very often, but this was pretty damn awesome. I love Stein's speech, how different Spirit's vocabulary is and just everything... Kicchiri, kacchiri, I suppose.

Sorry Spirit, I don't think gayness is catchable. Exspecially from madness. You're f*cked dude. And not in the good way...yet. Maybe if the writer adds a second chapter~? -looks pointedly at you- Hey! You should write more to this seriously though. This was really cute.

I think...xD That they were fun-ly in character. 3 I like it. And to be honest I hadnt even mean to stumble upon such a coupling at six in the morning. .

ooh god this is so great. and hilarious a,sdfaskfhkkkv it totally reads like canon, their characterizations.. and the dialogue is AWESOME. *_* i rly loved this!

lol'ed at the last line, but otherwise a great fanfic, love it!

:D

THISWASGREAT.

; v ; I urge you to continue on with more chapters. Pardon me for saying so, but you had me sitting on the edge of my seat and squealing like a horrible fangirl in a public place.

Itwasamazin'.

Ahh! Fantastically well written, I loved it so much! I felt almost as if I was watching this whole scene in Stein's laboratory! You're an amazing writer, and I should really go check out some more of your work. _

*throws sparkly stickers at you* Yay for pre-slash! :D

I must say I am completely in love with this story! Please write more of this pairing, it would be a great contribution to this fandom :3

Amazing. This was amazing.

You're a very witty writer, every other line had me giggling like a maniac. XD Asura's madnees making him gay. LMFAO.

I definately want more of this story.

"I find that without something to hold it in place my mind starts to slip"

-SteinsLittleExperiment

Very nice. I want some more! Write more please! :d

WTF! You said FRIENDSHIP! Not ROMANCE! Damn yaoi! I feel violated! Steinxspirit SUCKS! It's steinxmarie And spiritxanygirl

I KEEL YOU! Btw this is not a flame